Twinkle4ever

Very nice poetry. I like the title and while I was reading your poem I kept wondering why the title is Live! Live, I must! That's when I got to ...

Beautiful poem. I like how you started off with "I should be studying" and then, slowly, you advance in your peom in perfect order. Each paragraph is related to the ...

Hello Drakenor! This is a very interesting piece. The first thing I liked here was how you started your prologue. Your descriptions were very good about the star. I know ...

First of all, my heart is sinking right now. I can't believe Ryder didn't get to be a hunter. That's just bad news. The worst she could handle. And I ...

Oh God... poor Leo this time. Anyway, I give you thumbs up for the great turning point. This book could actually win a couple of awards. (I mean it!) And ...

Oh man, you have the best way to end the chapter. This time, I liked the way you described the Yeta with the skin, the moss, and eye-sockets. You know ...

I know I took a while but here I am. I can't say much again because I love your story. I wish I had the whole book opened in front ...

Hi, Noelle. I enjoyed your story very much. I'll have to admit that I couldn't stop reading once I started and that's very rare for me. I loved the way ...

This poetry reminds me of someone. You didn't use much words but you sure described all the boy's feelings. I like the paragraphing. I don't do poems so I'm not ...

Heya! I think your story is one of those which I just can't stop reading. And it's really rare for me to read the entire story. I usually get bored ...

Nice story. You added expressions wherever possible, keeping in mind not to overdo it. And I liked the words criss crossed and click clacked. I've never heard or read them ...

Sorry it took so long for me to reply. I've been trying to figure out where everything is on the new YWS. And your story has that special ability to ...

Suddenly the hairs on the back of my neck began to prickle I think it should be the hairs on the back of my neck begin to prickle since the ...

I guess a lot of people reviewed this so I might repeat what they've said. You've done pretty well to grasp the reader's attention and since it's a small piece ...

There's a lot of suspense in this story. Alright, here's my review. I think the dialogues are chosen perfectly here. What I mean is that the way of talking describes ...