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Hey. I really like the flow of the poem. Not one place did I feel that there was something off. You stayed with the rhythm. That's good. You wrote professionally. ...

Hey writingangel124xx, I loved this chapter. I didn't get bored while reading; not one bit! It's amazing how you describe each place. I loved the city of Magic and I ...

Hello! Although I haven't read many poems, I've still never come across something so beautiful. It was really awe-inspiring. I liked the repetition of 'Be still, my soul' and the ...

Oh god, what you wrote scared the life out of me. I still liked it a lot. Your poetry attracted my attention and once I started reading, I couldn't stop ...

This poem is related to reality; things that happen all around us. I like your way of writing. The things you've pointed out in your poem are true. That's what ...

Hey, I like your poem, Mystery Man. It's short but you've clearly conveyed your message here. It's sad that you're not allowed to love this guy. Anyway, love conquers all! ...

Hi. First of all, I love the title, it's catchy. Second, the I loved the whole poem. Especially the repetition of, Pessimists, you belong in a zoo. Other than that, ...

Hello. I read the beginning and I couldn't find any faults in it. You've done an outstanding job. There's definitely mystery here and It's really breathtaking! :D I liked the ...

Hi again, One thing is that it was so heart-aching. It filled my eyes with tears again. These stories you write are always filled with such strong emotions that people ...

Oh my god. You scared ME to death. The line, I reach peace when my heart explodes in my chest. It's scary to think about death but you really had ...

I really liked the theme of the poem. It's quite entertaining, 'Don't butter my toast'. Neatly done like a professional poet. It’s that slap you on the face, knock it ...

I like the way you've put emphasis on the butterfly's beauty. They really are unique creatures. It seems like you're talking to the butterfly which is what I liked most ...

Hello again! You were right about the second chapter. It definitely is more interesting and full of adventure, suspense, fantasy. I liked it.... no wait, I loved it. The whole ...

The lyrics are good, however, I did feel a like it was a little empty. You can try adding a few new lines to it. Anyway, I like it that ...

You've used excellent vocabulary. I like the way you've used so many rhyming words. It's fascinating indeed. Learn to love purpose, my love for purpose reflects in the depths of ...