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Re: remind me that i am alive
Hi! Tsholdin here for a review! I like this as just a statement, but I don't really see this as a poem. It is more like two run-on sentences in ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Heroes Fall (chapt. 3 part1)
Hi! Tsholdin here to review! So I think that this is an amazing chapter. This isn't really my type of book, but if it were, you would probably be a ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Three(Rhyme Scheme Fixed)
Hi! Tsholdin here for a review! I would like to start by saying that this hits VERY close to home for me. I think the first part flows better than ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Pointless.
Hi! Tsholdin here for a review! This is a very pointless piece. But I feel like it was also needed. I love how humorous this is. I had to Google ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: you
Hi! Tsholdin here for a review! This is a very beautiful poem and I can tell that it has come from somewere deep. The spacing of this piece is one ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Just Another Face
Hi GreenTulip! Tsholdin here for a review! I think this is an overall great poem. Just a few minor things: There used to be the one face, that could stand ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Disconnection is my Infection
Hi Unmarkedterritory, Tsholdin here for a review! So I really like this. In my point of view, I don't see anything that needs to be "fixed." I read this several ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Virtual
Hi SaccharineAm, Tsholdin here for a review! I think Subtle did very well! I love that in this you used lots of emotion, it helped me feel the pain that ...
Jan 22, 2014