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Hi! I really like this story! I like how you take time to write about the three kingdoms in a very detailed and vivid way, making me really see and ...

Hi! That's an interesting story. I could see that it started with Thorn raising up Dylan, and it seemed that the Cobra and the Eclipse Tribes are at war or ...

Hi! This is an intereting opening! I find the world setting to be pretty interesting - other worlds and people with special talents/abilities? I'm also curious about who the figure ...

Thank you for sharing such a beautiful and touching story. It brought me to tears. Your langugage is not fancy but carries great emotional depth, warmth, and tranquility. I especially ...

Hey!!! I love your story! I find it very interesting and exciting. I think for the first chapter, you did a great job with character introduction and world setting. The ...

Hi!! This is a very interesting story! It reminded me of Harry Potter, which I also like a lot. I feel like there's lots of mysteries and suspensions here - ...

Hi! I like this story! I noticed how you used details of the apartment and other people to show signs of danger. As the story proceeds, the protagonist is slowly ...

OMG this work really scared me, especially the ending. But you did a great job! I love how you described mythos of the ancient world, and your language created a ...

Hi! I like this piece. I had thought about the same question in high school myself, but I approached it more from a quantum physics perspective than a philosophical one. ...

Hi! I like this piece! When I read, I marveled at how you turned a "small" thing into a meaningful short story, from the perspetive of a lamb (yet describing ...

Hi! Here I am for Chapter 4! While I read through it, I started to feel the same peace and calmness as Nova did. Your language and your writing style ...

This chapter describes the morning training at Uncle Max's house, which gives me a more vivid impression of what Nova's life is like. It also worked out pretty well for ...

Nice second chapter! Now we're into Uncle Max's house and the mysterious door had appeared! The pace is as good as the first Chapter - you provided sufficient information for ...

Hi! I really love your work! I think this is a fascinating topic and the first chapter is very intruging. I like the main character Nova - smart, courageous, risk-taking, ...

Hi!! This is such a fascinating story and I can't wait to know more about it! You had a very interesting world building - the Old Wood, the Far Wood, ...