Trinity9001

I'm not a big fan of poetry, but I really, really liked this piece. I love your word choice and everything. This was really great and you should keep on ...

I've always like apprentice books, so it brought a smile to my face when I read this piece. I really like your writing style, but there are a few things ...

Hey Angel :) I really like the detail you put into this piece! The sentences flow nicely and it was really interesting. I love the ending scene, it made my ...

Hey Crazygirl! I like the theme of this story, but there are a few gramatical errors. My life was so boring [,] I wished some adventures would happen in it ...

I really like this work, it had great details and was very interesting. "And those knives seemed to scratch his brain [red]to[/red]" I would change the "to" and the end ...

I forgot to mark that as a review so I'll mark this one. sorry I really liked this chapter, but there are a couple of mistakes. "does my parents ever ...

I really like this poem, it has a really deep meaning and makes you think. "As beautiful as you" "Less ugly than me" I think you should make these statements ...