Trident

^_^ I was actually going to mention the Hemingway thing. That very story! Left it out for some reason. It was successful, I'd say.

Indeed, the original title had been "flirting after cumming"... XD Brad, you're incorrigible. Or should I say "encourage-able"? Mighty quip.

Hm. I'm not sure I like this very much. I didn't really like the part about the dictionary. It seems likes its been used too much to be original. There ...

Thanks Clau. I never remember the shortcut for the em dash, so I usually just put two short dashes. I'll see if I can't get them to work...

Read it. Love it.

Yes, it is very much a work in progress. I had Incan look at it before and he said it was lacking in clarity. I'll try to keep the explaining ...

It wouldn't ruin it, I suppose, unless your idea was ruined by my explanation. It was meant to convey the fact that he drank heavily and that his liver was ...

Much thanks, Imp. *Sigh* I've been in a bit of a slump these past few days, perhaps it's beginning to show in my writing. I'm unsure if this is worthy ...

Ah, I see. I guess I'm a little behind on my Milton. ^_^

I'm afraid adding structure in this instance would be more like adding a $30 steak to a plateful of ketchup. Best, Trident

Lol, well I guess I should look at the forum it's in before I go correcting your dialogue. ^_^

Also, what is the significance of "taking it west"? I think it refers to the U.S. expansion westward... making a new life, starting anew. But of course, I could be ...

This member has already been banned for plagiarism.

I’m quite a good looking boy; I can get most girls if I want to. I stopped reading after this line.

In all of their conversation, Marie had forgotten about her husband. He was easily enough forgotten, but if she were to get out of this house, she would need him ...