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Thank you! As always, your advice is very much appreciated. :)

Thanks! :)

Surprise!

THANK YOU!!This is exactly the kind of review I wanted. You're awesome. And al's your advice.

Thanks! :-) Cool to hear your interpretation of it, too.

Thank you :-) for both the review and follow! :-D

I just wanted to quickly say that I just read your edited version, and you've done a brilliant job of eliminating the info dumping. The ending was so much easier ...

I'll see how may thoughts I have! XD

By 'my thought' I meant what I thought of the novel as a whole so far. I just suggested putting it into a PM or something just cos it might ...

No worries. :-) I know the feeling of struggling through a chapter all too well (third chapters are my nemesis). I've got a day off school tomorow, so maybe I ...

Thank you! I was kind of treating the texting kinda like dialogue, but I think I might see how other authors have treated it in their books.

Sorry I'm a bit late, but thank you! And you're spot on on the point about the bus. I was really struggling to get through that part of the chapter, ...

Thank you!

I'm a bit late, but thank you for the review! :-D On the bit at the start, I italicised it because it's set after the events of the bulk of ...

Thanks for the review! :-) You've definitely given me some food for thought there, and is very much appreciated. The smoulder is kind of a happy accident. Eugene's character wasn't ...