TriSARAHtops

Hey there! You're progressing really well on this. I feel like this first chapter is much improved on the prologue, which was already pretty good. It seems like you're finding ...

Hello! I really liked this piece. I don't have much to say that hasn't already been said, and it's obvious that you've taken the time to edit, because I didn't ...

Hi there! I feel like this piece has a lot of potential, and with some work it could be quite excellent. The premise is interesting, and I was intrigued by ...

Hello, I quite enjoyed this piece. The writing was good, the plot was interesting there was a nice amount of humour woven throughout that gave this piece, which could have ...

Wow, this was really clever! :-) I loved how you turned all those emotions into 'people', and the progression of the plot was fantastic. I've got friends who perform and ...

This was lovely. To be honest, I could probably leave it at, that, because this little story was just a pleasure to read. You ticked all the story boxes - ...

Sorry, clicked the wrong button below, but here's my review! It kind of feels wrong to say that I liked this, because it's pretty dark and all that, but there ...

It's a real shame that you had to work to a word limit (they suck, I know), because I want to know more! For a first draft, it's very good, ...

This piece was quite lovely to read. There was some really wonderful imagery, and there were passages in it that I loved. I loved how you managed to tie the ...

Hi there! This is a really interesting piece and a very clever prologue. I'm interested to see where you take this. As a prologue it really works, because you get ...

Hello! I quite liked this piece. It has one of tje most intriguing and exciting titles I've seen in a little while, and caught my eye. The pacing was very ...

This was pretty impressive. There were some passages in here that I absolutely adored, and the imagery was quite stunning, and perfectly suited to this piece. The style kind of ...

Ah. It seems this is a story I've gotten hooked onto already. I don't have anything bad to say about it, and I'm interested to see where it does next. ...

Hi! This was a really sweet story, and very light-hearted. You've done a good job, and the plot is interesting and original. I have a few things I'd like to ...

This was really good. Well-written and nicely paced, I enjoyed reading it. I was, however, left a little confused. I got that it was a dream pretty quickly, but I ...