Trelose

Thank you! I've been trying to figure out how to properly format poetry on this site. This is the only place I publish them, so I'm used to just using ...

Thank you so much! I kinda wrote this on the fly a while back in my journal, which explains why my grammar/spelling in this seems to be... not so great ...

In the writer on the site, I did separate it (at least adding an extra line), though it didn't show here. I noticed it when I published it, though. Is ...

Thank you so much! Like I mentioned below, I thought I added them but I guess I didn't. :( (for some reason, it doesn't transfer from LibreOffice to here. D: ...

Sadness! D: And thank you so much for your review. Seriously.

Yeah, I thought I did that in the editor but it seems not. It doesn't like to keep the formatting I have in my word processor. :( Is there a ...

Thank you so much! I do have a question: How would I add structure to it? This was an experiment and probably the most structured poem I've done (and I'm ...

Hello! I've got to say the imagery in this poem is phenomenal - it makes me envious. Beyond that, the wording itself flowed INCREDIBLY well. I don't really have any ...

It's written in iambic pentameter/villanelle - part of it being a villanelle involves phrases being repeated.

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Hello there! First, I've got to say I love your way with words. While most poets (including myself) love to target "beautiful" wording, I loved the slightly quirky/playful way you ...

Oh, okay! That's why I tried not to push too hard on that. Formatting is... weird, to say the least. Thanks for the response! And, again, great job on the ...

Honestly, outside of the bold and italics, the formatting is standard poetry format. Also, poems have been used as stories before - look at Edgar Allan Poe's "Ulalume" - it ...

Hey, Odd! Trelose here - Just wanted to throw my two cents in. I LOVE this poem - it's accurate and rather witty. It has a decent flow and made ...

Thank you so much, Crobbins. :D I'll try to work on that along with the rhyming. Been busy due to Thanksgiving, so I haven't had time to edit. :(