TreeHugger12

The past tense of lay is laid. That's the only thing I noticed. You did it twice here. Otherwise, your work is really good! I hope to see more of ...

Wow, I don't have much to say. I hate to write an unhelpful response, but there isn't much bad to be said. I loved it. :] I second the motion.

Ooh my gosh!!! Thanks for replying... Hmm... I liked your comments and I didn't even notice some of the mistakes I made. Thanks again... I'll try re-editing this tomorrow... I'm ...

Awww.... such a pretty poem... I loved it!!! :)

I cannot think straight right now so I'll just say this.... Nice one.. :) Two thumbs up.

awwwww... it's soooo cute!

I like the rhyme in some parts of your poem. It's almost like a song. And I love the message. Great work! I hope to see more of your work ...

It does sound kjinda funny in english... *giggles*

OMG, retro. I love this poem. Its short, clear but meaningful. I guess that's enough said. *wipes tears* ---Anyone else want a tissue?

I loved it... great work!

Waaah! Why didn't I check my YWS? Anyway, thanks for the comment skins. You just made my day. :D

Aw... thanks for the comment. Although it's been quite a while since I visited here. BTW, you're awesome!

Ooh, love this one too! It's original, it says something and it takes the subject in the opposite direction of what people usually think. Great work retrodisco!

This poem was just so chilling. Reading it gave me goosebumps. But still loved it! :)

I liked it... thats all. :) Keep up the good work.