It's a weird story a friend of mine wrote and he asked me to post it here. Something about being too lazy to make an account. The story is intended to get you confused but all will be explained once you finish it.
2001
Finnegan’s mother buys him a pet frog.
He immediately tried to think of a name to call it. “I’ll call him Kermit! He’ll be my bestest friend from now on!”
…And become bestest friends they did…
2011
“Oh Crap… It’s not dad… It’s Kermit…And it’s not the killer, ITS THAT GIRL!” Finnegan summers mutters to himself while covered in soiled clothes, holding a rusty shovel.
2012
The last time scarlet had heard about the name Finnegan was during senior year. And now that she’s 21 and a decent adult, the fact that not only the bearer of the name, but also his mother, had come to her begging for her to carry out the stranger’s last request is kind of a nuisance.
2008
Finnegan Summers was just another teenager studying in Berkley high. He barely talked to anyone, and never even once bothered to participate in class. He was of average height, considerably skinny, and had a few freckles appearing here and there. Rumour had it that he was schizophrenic, which was also one of the main reasons why other students tend to stay away from him. Another reason was the strange look in his eyes, which was emphasized by a weird scar beneath his left eye. Summers was unusually quiet, and spent most of his time hitting the books instead of girls. On the contrary, Scarlet Nimble was popular, and one of the students who would usually be seen being jeered over by the never-ending attempts of idiotic football players to “lend a hand”. She was intelligent, beautiful and most of all, modest in a way. She never let any of the compliments get to her head, and has a good eye when it comes to choosing friends.
2012
“Kiss me Scarlet…Kiss me before I leave” scarlet pulled away and replied in disgust “what the hell Finnegan? I barely even know you”. Fin turned away and sighed in dismay. “Leave me alone and leave me to die…I don’t care”
2010
“Dad?!! Dad!!!” fin’s cries couldn’t have been louder as he watched his father being gunned down right in front of him. The killer had runaway thereafter and was reported to have shot himself in the head too right after being found.
“Oh crap…I’m doomed, it’s the cat farm for me” Fin said to himself.
2002
Finnegan finds a strange-looking creature in a forest near his house.
“Lend me your ear boy, for this may be the first and last time you’ll see and hear a nymph”. Without fear nor hesitation, fin intently listened to the strange creature’s mumbling. He never really understood the words that came out of its mouth. But somehow, when it was over, he felt a really deep void welling within him.
2012
“Thank you scarlet, ever since you’ve been visiting him, he’s never been down a single day…you’ve even helped him get over his father’s death” Scarlet turned her head politely and answered “It’s my pleasure Mrs. Summers, Finny’s turned out to be quite a good friend to me too anyway.”
2009
The graduation ball had never been less disappointing; Finnegan lost his pet Kermit, to a sissy girl named Scarlet. The girl had accidentally killed his pet frog when she tried to grab a sandwich beside the punch bowl, and unintentionally slipped her heels into the poor amphibian’s skull. ”Oh Gruesome death! I plead mercy for thy spirit’s safety!” was the first and last thing that scarlet ever heard come out of Finnegan’s mouth.
“Why’d you even bring a frog to the Grad-Ball anyway?!”
2013
“I didn’t even think you were human…but now that I got to know you, I think your not as bad as I thought…*sob*..and now you’re *sob* leaving….” Finnegan was shocked by what affectionate meaning that was within what his friend just said. “It’s okay scarlet, it’s not like I won’t see you again someday…It won’t be the same, but I’ll still be the same perso…..umm...Creature”
2002
“But what if I don’t get to kiss that person?! And what if it’s a dude? HEY! YOU OLD FART!! Answer me! I don’t want to be turned into a Cat!!!” but all was too late. The nymph had already turned into blue silvery dust.
2012
“I don’t know finny… all these hospital visits have been fun and all, it was kinda weird when you asked me to kiss you the first day though, but I’m not sure I’ll be able to believe in all that nymph-nonsense that you’ve been talking about” Finnegan felt uneasy with scarlet’s reply.”Then just kiss me and be done with it scarlet” Miss nimble sighed “here we go again…”
2002
“What’s ‘yer favourite animal?” asked the small bearded creature. “I like cats!!” Finnegan cheerfully answered. “ya do huh..?” It replied with its wrinkly old forehead bouncing up and down. “well here goes…magistus excorcirus felineotee” Finnegan had weird feeling in his stomach right after the little old dwarf had said those words.
2011
Finnegan Summers discovers that he has Cancer. He starts to panic and recklessly attempts to dig the grave of his father’s murderer.
2013
“KISS ME NOW SCA-“*TOOOOOT* the sound filled the room as fin spent his last breath as his vital signs went zero. “I was too late…I’m sorry fin..*sob* I’m sorry *sob* it’s just that….*sob* I still want to see you…*sob* even though…” scarlet cried as if there was no more tomorrow.
2002
“Now if ya don’t get to kiss the person who takes away the BEING that you love most, then you’ll be turned into the animal that you like most, and re-appear somewhere else in the world the second that ‘yer heart stops beatin’.”
Finnegan never really understood what the old looking creature said. But he knew that he was caught up within something extraordinary.
2027
Scarlet Nimble buys her son a pet cat that had a strange scar beneath its left eye.
The kid immediately tried to think of a name to call it.
“I’ll call him-“ but before her son could finish, scarlet said in a low voice that sounded like shattering glass. “*sob* Why don’t we name him Fin? *sob* wouldn’t that be nice..?”
“aww…don’t cry mama….I’ll call him Finny! He’ll be my bestest friend from now on!”
…And become bestest friends they did…
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Aw... thanks for the comment. Although it's been quite a while since I visited here. BTW, you're awesome!
Finnegan...Finnegan... Where have I heard that darn name from....All well it's gone. I really liked these they were funny and... AWESOME! <-- I say that alot, awesome...awesome!
Any who, I couldn't find any grammatical errors, though I think you could've bolded those years....now I sound like my older brother. Refrase: AWESOME!