ToritheMonster

I didn't even know emo people had their own poetry... I feel mildly offended. Well, this wasn't bad! It just... wasn't amazing. Okay fine. I'll be honest with you because ...

Oooh, I liked it. However, I don't think Snape would ever be that nice... not even to Draco. He definitely wouldn't make a headstone for a peacock and hug little ...

Heya! I'm pressed for time, so I'm gonna skip the nitpicks. I didn't really have any that hadn't been pointed out. So, I quite enjoyed this. I love cute, confusing ...

Woah, mate! You just topped the awesome meter, here. On a scale of one to awesome, this poem is awesome. Seriously. One of my favourites in a long time. You ...

Skinsy! Another brilliant chapter, I must say. Very nice. So, I'm glad that Oliver didn't die. He has some good important-character-potential. You style of writing is unfailingly real and funny. ...

Hiya! So this was a cute little work. I'll be honest, I don't quite understand your middle stanza completely. In Israel you'll say peace/hello/goodbye, and in France you'll say yes? ...

Hiya! I really enjoyed this, even though, as you know, I haven't read the previous chapters. I just had a few little nitpicks. As I'm too lazy to quote them ...

'Ello, luv! So, this is another entertaining chapter.You pretty much make us like Oliver and then pretty much off him in the same sequence. It's like alittle emotional rollercoaster. Very ...

Skinsy! I don't know why you say this is bad... I'll be honest, I think I liked this chapter the best. That said, I'm more of a sci-fi /horror girl ...

Okay! My corrections/suggestions are in red, sections that could use rephrasing are blue. I am trapped in my own head, My mind like prison walls. The barbed wire memories retain ...

Heya Skinsy! Your stalkeree is here to review. So, I quite enjoyed this chapter. I'll be honest, I found it quite amusing to picture Oliver tagging along with some glamorous ...

Hiya, mate! So, this was very good. The emotions rang true, and I got your meaning. Very nice job. I see you did this freeform, which is okay. However, as ...

Hiya! Dreamy here, as requested. So, I thought that your overall grammar and spelling is okay. Just fix the mistakes Spork pointed out, and please don't use caps lock. Italics ...

Very nice! I quite enjoyed this. Probably because I like that song so much. Your characters were lovable, and you have an interesting plot going. I feel like this needed ...

Here as requested! My comments/corrections are in red . If I see something that I think would sound better if worded differently, I'll put my suggested sentence next to it ...