ToritheMonster

What is with all these one sentence reviews?! Okay, here's my review: I was there When you won your first gymnastics medal I cheered The loudest I was there When ...

Hi there! So, this is an okay poem. It does have a dream-like feel to it, which was your goal. It gives me a good mental picture of a foggy ...

Le Review: You'd think After all my fights and struggles That I'd get stronger (hm. Not the most gripping opener.) But I am not I am getting weak and frail ...

Okay... so I really don't get this. The constant use of ... is distracting, and using a ton of periods isn't going to make me not notice how poorly written ...

Well, hi there! Le Review: Winging its lonely way (is 'winging' actually a verb? I don't like it.) Onward toward the horizon. Never a permanent denizen, But ever soaring away. ...

Hi there! I won't do nitpicks because it's been done and you said you don't care about grammar and spelling anywho. I'll just tell you my thoughts: I really liked ...

Le review: I'm lost on the road of life, Just trying to survive. I don't know where I am, But I'll find my way home again. (This is an okay ...

Hi there! One thing about posting haiku: while you may do so, by all means, it's often better to post them in a group or collection if you want thorough ...

Le review: Just for the hell of it, you took out scissors and cut up the sky. (I love this stanza! The first two and a half lines you're like... ...

Le review: To Annalane. When looking in each other's eyes, cliche. very . We forget the world, We set free our hearts, 'we' again? I wouldn't keep saying it. And ...

Hey there m'dear! So, I'll start off by saying I loved this. It was emotional yet distant, and I could picture a waiting room for an office- I pictured a ...

Hi there! So, here's my general impression. This is a decent story. It's very original, and it has a warm, magical undertone to it. However, it's confusing and not particularly ...

I actually really like this. It's simple, nothing particularly complex or deep, but really well written. It's very entertaining, and I can't wait to read your next instalment! My suggestions ...

Holy... quadruple post. I'm so sorry that you had to go through all that. Nobody deserves that. As for the poem itself, it's very good. It rings with emotion, and ...

Hi sgp! This is a huge improvement over a lot of your poetry I've read. Congratulations! I see you've been taking our advice. This is actually a pretty good poem! ...