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Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review and to at long last help get this piece out of the Green Room! The first thing I noticed is that this piece ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review and to get this piece out of the Green Room! First of all, I'd like to apologize because I can be super nit-picky ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! I would actually recommend taking out the disclaimer that you wrote it for English. It's a good story and it's enjoyable and being ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! First of all, I think you definitely have a good story going and I can tell you know what you're doing with it. ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's get this piece out of the Green Room! The first thing I'm curious about is why Ryn has a curtain for privacy ...

This is awesome! I'm on my phone so this might be a wonky review but just bear with me :) So, I think that there's an overall lack of rhythm ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's start on getting this piece out of the Green Room at long last, shall we? So, the first thing I'm going to ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's get this out the Green Room, shall we? A few technical things, first. The opening two sentences are just a little confusing. ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! So, first of all, congratulations on another chapter! I'm fairly sure you've now written more chapters on a book than I ever have ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here to review and hopefully help this graduate from the Green Room! I'm going to be nitpicky first because it's the sort of mood I'm in right ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review of this chapter! (I really need to sit down and read it all in order; I think I've read half of it by ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review of this fine chapter! Well, first off all, this is an interesting twist! So now Nathan is a Hunter, and Zander is dangerous. ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Let's get this piece out of the Green Room, shall we? First of all, I love that you have a summary of the ...

Hey there! Toboldlygo here for a review! Wow! What a fantastic poem! There's so much emotion and it's so heartfelt. I loved how you seem to have a dialogue between ...

Hi there! Toboldlygo here for a review! And I am still using my phone, so please be patient with typos/mistakes. My keyboard is small and my thumbs fat. This piece ...