TinyDancer

This is lovely! Not much to say except that I only noticed a few grammatical and verb tense errors, but other than that, it was phenomenal. The imagery you used ...

This was perfectly disturbing. I love it. Nice use of imagery and flow. The rhythm was superb and not forced at all. You didn't have any grammar mistakes. It was ...

Oh, and as for the title, I like Suddenly. But if you were going for something a bit more symbolic, maybe something like Candles and Rain, just because those were ...

Thank you! I'm in the experimental stage for now (fancy way of saying I can't commit to any ideas yet), but I will definitely keep posting appetizers. Probably will be ...

This is such a sweet concept, and you really nailed it. The spacing was a bit off, yes, but I still enjoyed the content! You have a good sense of ...

Thanks for the review! I will get right on those corrections. I agree with all of them! Thanks so much! ~Jess

Thanks xhellysmx! I had the most trouble with that line and I tried to put it many different ways, but I kind of like how it is, and I think ...

Thanks Firewriter! I usually do my best work late at night :) and yes, I've been told I am a strange person. It suits me though. I love the name ...

Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews :) Audrey- In the piece, I was alliterating the crow to somebody I know. He's like I described the crow to be-- misunderstood and ...

Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews. I will go change those grammar mistakes as soon as I get back to my house and can fix them on a real computer ...

Hey- Great work here. Only saw a few grammatical mistakes, but it was so enveloping overall. I love the tension between the girl and the writer. It was a nice ...

ItIsLove- Thanks for the review and pointers. I will add some breaks in a minute. When I wrote it, I wrote it as one thought but you are definitely right ...

Thanks guys! Kagi- I was on the fence about the line you quoted first. It was personal for me but I didn't think people would get it. I thought they'd ...

Hey there! Thanks for the review. The title has to do with our wish to keep our memories frozen. It fails though, as they're constantly moving and changing. I just ...

I really wish I could hear how the melody goes. I love the imagery and the metaphorical touches. You're a great songwriter! Keep up the good work.