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TinyDancer

  • Other » General, Fantasy Re: Watercolor Smash

    Hi there! So let's just get one thing straight--I'm not an art reviewer. But I don't think one needs to be an art reviewer to appreciate art! And these paintings ...

    Feb 9, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Beautiful Nightmare

    Wow this was so beautiful! I really wish I could hear it played. You had a lovely rhythm throughout and it was interesting how you kept it sweet but still ...

    Feb 6, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: hhhhh

    Hi there! This was a cute little poem with a good message at the end. I agree with BlueAfrica's first post, and the rhythm is indeed off, as is the ...

    Feb 6, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken Wings

    Hello there! I thought this was pretty good. Not stellar, but pretty good. I was lost with the rhythm for the entire poem. You seemed to jump around far too ...

    Feb 6, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: My Thoughts

    This was goreous, my friend :) You have a gift. And if this is what happens WITH writer's block, I really want to know how you write without it haha! ...

    Jan 8, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: The New Yws

    Eh, I have my doubts right now, but I think it will be better than ever when everything is done. Regarding your most recent comment, I wonder why you gave ...

    Jan 6, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Trixie

    Ah! I can't find the "like" button. Usually, when I don't have any constructive criticism, I will like something and leave it there. That's what I was going to do ...

    Jan 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Winter's love.

    Oh my gosh, this was so incredibly gorgeous. This should be published :) I loved the whole concept of the bold at the beginning of the lines that told a ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: It's Not His Kiss [Edited]

    This was incredibly sweet and I really loved the little details you so beautifully described. You really gave me the warm-and-fuzzies with this one xD I only have one critique ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Alone in my head

    Hey there, just here to return the favor for your review on Fairytales. This was a good way, don't worry :) You have a nice rhythm established by the middle ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Better Tomorrow

    Hey there, just returning the favor for your review of Fairytales. You have some good ideas here. Personally, I think they could be presented in a more organized, better flowing ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: lost once again

    Hey there, just returning the favor for your review on my piece. I couldn't find any large-scale errors here, and I really enjoyed the subject. You played the stanzas well ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: College Essay {help help please}

    Ok, here we go. I am returning the favor for your review on Sleepless, and I will try to be thorough with this since it's for college. We were greeted ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Kissing Alfredo

    Oh my goodness. You are so talented. This is so sweet and lovely and perfect ;) I really think you should expand this as you were contemplating doing in the ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Doll On The Shelf

    Hey there, just returning the favor for your review on my piece. I really liked this :) It perfectly captured the emotion a girl feels when her man fails to ...

    Dec 13, 2011


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