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TimmyJake

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  • Article / Essay » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Just a milestone.

    Thanks!

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Legend of the Scale

    Gosh, you really are digging deep! Thank you so much. I wrote this a year ago, and have written 400 pages past that in my book. lol This chapter is ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Science Re: The Existence of God

    Attack with pleasure! I need reviews badly! :D

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Science Re: The Existence of God

    Right you are, my friend. Right you are

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Science Re: The Existence of God

    Thanks for your review!

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Man Inside

    Thanks for the review!

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Our Vision of Change

    Thank you so much! :D

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Silver Lining In The Sky

    Well, I did some work on it... Don't be afraid to just tell me certain spots if you see them. ;) Is it any better now? :D

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Silver Lining In The Sky

    Well, I did some work on it... Don't be afraid to just tell me certain spots if you see them. ;) Is it any better now? :D

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Silver Lining In The Sky

    Thank you so much for your review! I will work on that. :D

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Silver Lining In The Sky

    Any suggestions on certain parts that need changing? I'm going to read it over and work on it... :D

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Silver Lining In The Sky

    Thank you so much! I will work on that! And yes, it is my first attempt at that. :D

    Jan 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Battle of Marathon, Pt. 3

    Thanks for your review. Oops! I did a lot of research just for that part and must have gotten it messed up... I will put that into feet since it ...

    Jan 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: The Battle of Marathon, And Aftermath Part 2

    Thanks for your reviews!

    Jan 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Battle of Marathon, Pt. 4

    Timmy here. I did some editing, so I hope it turns out better now. :D

    Jan 18, 2014


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price