TimmyJake

Timmy here! I threw in my introduction salutation a few days ago, but I couldn't get to it until now. All the other review requests and stuff. Yeah. But I ...

Timmy here! So I have a few things to get out of the way before I go onto any technical. I have never said this before in any of the ...

Timmy here! So I think I will go through this as I read, and pull out bits to nitpick just because I will be able to find them better, and ...

Timmy here! So I don't have much to say on this chapter, I am afraid. It's beautifully written, and I loved the explanation of why Tirion wasn't affected. To me, ...

Timmy here! Since this piece is longer, and I want to see things as I read - it's easier for me to remember things that way - I shall critique ...

Timmy here! So this was a really neat chapter, and I loved the entire nightmare session thingy, with the animals seeming to cause them and all. How all of their ...

Timmy here! I will try to give you a decent length review on this, but since this is so good, I don't know how I will do it. Shall we ...

Timmy here! So, yeah. I don't know what to say about this chapter. Read it: check. Love it: check. What else is there? I don't think there is much I ...

Timmy here! To be honest, I don't know what to say. Usually I can go and ramble on about something with the plot, but seeing that Blue has already done ...

Timmy here! Sorry for my almost permanent delay. My review requests (or reviews I promised, like your book) has been pretty hectic lately, as has been my life. Nevermind that! ...

Timmy here! I don't have much to say, really. The other reviewers have done an amazing job snatching everything I would have wanted to say on this. But, nevertheless, I ...

Timmy here! So you talk about a lot of character development in this and it's only purpose being for that aforementioned fact? I say you accomplish a lot more than ...

Timmy here! This will be a small review, because I am hard pressed for time, and because there isn't much to say, but I will try to get in as ...

Timmy here! Wait. This is the same prologue, only edited? *eyes suspiciously* Sure seems a lot different to me.... Like, it's a lot different. Like a whole knew prologue, written ...

Timmy here! So I will try to write this review as best I can without using quotes, since I don't think that will help you as much in this case ...