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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 16 Part 1

    Timmy here! Yayyyyy. More from Falyn’s point of view. Makes me mucho happy. I was missing her. She knew enough about magic to know how much energy it took to ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 15

    Timmy here! Again…. You know, I think I might stick with that style of reviewing for a while. It proves to help me remember stuff. :D WAIT. Who are these ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 14 Part 2

    Timmy here! So I will just review as I read along, if that’s okay? :D The first thing I noticed: There didn’t seem to be much surprise with Akia realizing ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Other » Horror, General Re: I can't explain

    Timmy here So I will make this review short and sweet, because everyone else has gotten the nitpicks. I just want to focus on one thing in this review: paragraphs ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Elementárni ~ 2.2

    Timmy here! Now one thing I realized when I saw this… This character is one of those I began YWS with. I believe ole’ Hawk was one of those precious ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Please wait, don't grow up yet

    Timmy here! I have had this page open for a day now, wanting to write a review for it and not finding the time. Now I get to it. Let's ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 4.1

    There's no need to fear. The Timmy is finally here. (hehe, isn't it perfect?) Yes, the chapters are coming along slowly, but you know what? They're coming, so be proud ...

    Oct 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Trying: Chapter 6.1

    Timmy here, young padawan! (hehe) I am going to do this review as I read through the piece. I think I’ll pick up on more stuff if I do it ...

    Oct 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 14 Part 1

    Timmy here! Let’s do this review same as last, okay? So I will just read through and hand out my thoughts. :D everything from here on out is going to ...

    Oct 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 13

    Timmy here! I think I shall review this piece as I go, giving you my comments on story and whatnot. Let’s get started. One thing in particular I love about ...

    Oct 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i held onto september

    Timmy here! I only have a very short moment, so I will try to give you the best review I can in that time period. Here we go. I loved ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Sweet Whisperings

    Timmy here! Now I know it's strange for me to pop in to review a piece that has been on YWS for an entire year, and especially when there hasn't ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 12: Downtown

    Timmy here! You know how long I have been waiting for this. Thanks for posting. :D This is a good chapter. I love how we see more of Sara, and ...

    Oct 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 29

    Timmy here! So I am really tired and it's early, so I may feel like you did when you wrote this. Hopefully my review can come out as good as ...

    Oct 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Truant: Chapter Seven (Part 1)

    Timmy here! I am feeling rather lazy today, so I will probably not do too many nitpicks, and just give you comments on story and characters and blah, blah, etc... ...

    Oct 11, 2014


You have to write the book that wants to be written. And if the book will be too difficult for grown-ups, then you write it for children.
— Madeleine L'Engle, Author