Tikaya

Hmm I wonder when Nicole had the time to do her studying. I got the impression that they’ve been really busy recently! Hmmmmmmm the article is kinda mysterious but I’m ...

Why I was less critical here? Dominic had no reason to care about Shadow so the narrative wasn't weighed down by his absence =D Thanks for the replies, they make ...

Ah no don't make this about me not knowing the characters :) I meant it more like the scene was confusingly established and that Dominic, to me, literally came out ...

Oh that is a twist I did not expect. Ah well, random round redemption it is. (I skimmed this chapter, sorry) And hey, if he doesn't make it in the ...

Ah got it. Maybe there's a way to make the three choices Smolder can make even more clear? :)

Ohhhh. Yeah, that makes sense!

Thanks for your reply! I'm really looking forward to reading the first chapter which I have put on my list for the day that the Green Room feels less... overful. ...

No no, I got that it was a knife! I wonder if it meant something that it's silver since that's usual one of the metals that can ward off fairies ...

Never fear, speech tags are easy. If it's something that can be reasonably interpreted as a speech verb, it's with a comma instead of a period. Things like "say"or "whisper" ...

Well that is very vague. And with a poem so short, not sure what else you want me to say. I told you what I liked and that I didn't ...

Oh that is really sad and you can feel the emotions in every line. I'm sorry this happened to you :( It's really haunting that no matter how old one ...

I like the line about the eyes melting into her. I don't like the general description of her though (too much use of pretty) but maybe that is just because ...