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Re: The many winding paths of Grasscove, USA: Part Two
Ah alright so we get the context to Lilliana now. Here goes. I want to know what my fav sceptic found out abt the supernatural! ….and woah, what a… what ...
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Re: The many winding paths of Grasscove, USA: Part One
I like the beginning of this. I like how you set the scene and immediately show us the problem of your MC :3 I like Lilliana’s tenacity. I like that ...
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Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part Three
Hmm my thought for this part is actually[and I love how this will sound]: Do the cannibals get to leave this area after they can acquire a full set of ...
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Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part Two
Okay, let’s find out what’s deeper than hell ;) Hmmm I somehow need to think of the soul room from Soul Eater. Maybe it’s the velvet. And the piano… I ...
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Re: Alexandria: Bone Boy
I like the way Alexandria describes her memories :3 Gives me a fuzzy feeling too! Oh and I like that Frank’s so understanding and goes along with it! I think ...
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Re: Emberlynn and Juniper’s deaths
Annd final story in this folder (for now)! Oh and we are back to Circe and her twisted self. Oh nonono, run girls run. That is … that is certainly ...
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Re: When Halloween is over
Feels like you published this at the perfect time of year and here I am, like a month too late xd And if that is’t a traumatizing thing to hear: ...
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Re: Emberlynn and Juniper’s first night at Circe’s
Next up! The conjoined twins. Thanks for clarifying some info abt them in your comment 😊 Ah so they heard the music and ended up meeting Circe… I do wonder ...
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Re: Circe’s murders
Hi creeper, second story of today, let’s go! And what a start to the story @.@ But shouldn’t it “all who looked up to her” or is she already starting ...
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Re: Asking Erik out
I always like it when it’s not on the boy to ask for a date. So, already positive feelings for this one 😊 Oh I wish we got a bit ...
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Re: Gods of Glassacre CH 3: Echoes of the Forgotten
Hi and hello! I am the Green Room Witch and I have come for your story with this Review! Dw I did skim the other 2 chapters to get a ...
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Re: Felicia’s origin: “Marcia Blythe’s dear love”
Hmmm she can see the paranormal but it’s not mentioned if her parents could. So would have even be possible to show them the demon, even if he were not ...
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Re: It hurts, but it has to happen
Ah this is before the tragedy that happens when Perdita digs her hole (so deep)? Oh my, and we’re getting right into the feels. Poor Perdita. It feels like they ...
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Re: Alanna helps Caden [Part Four]
Alright, I think this is the final story of this folder still in the Green Room. Hia! Thanks for the explanation in the AN! Oh my, so he does in ...
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Re: Emberlynn and Juniper’s journey to the circus!
I like the action beginning of this with the two girls jumping out the window. Also like that I easily understood why they’re running, even without context. Hmm, I am ...
Dec 2, 2025
