Tikaya

I’m still looking for a short story to add to the awards, so I’ll be reading a few, even if they are out of the Green Room ^^ Already like ...

Alrighty. Congraz on your first post and welcome to this site 😊 First thing first: you should take heed of your very first sentence and yours is already rly confusing. ...

Ok idk why but I’m struggling with long-form text today, so I am back for a review for you 😊 I like the way you say this: “her eyes held ...

Hi Orion, you might want to make sure that the chapters are all in order in your folder. It's a bit hard to click through them (checked the recent ones ...

Ach Tao. You don’t understand. I don’t want you to explain things in post, I want your screenplay to give the explanations xd Nobody forces you to publish the scenes ...

Hmm it is late and I am tired. But I kinda wanna read on. So here I am. What is the difference between “being taken there” and “being placed here”? ...

Love the scene setting for scene 7. Much better than scene 5. And he gets his rat back xd some rat at least Hm is this really an alternative world? ...

Hi Tao. Finally caught up with most of the stuff that’s older than your screenplay. See, waiting it out eventually lets me come to you, even without bribes =D Tao, ...

*reads cws* Yay. This is gonna be a good one =D Hi yosh 😊 I am not a romance gal but I shall preserve, despite my trepidation at reading the ...

Hallo Roxanne, the fifth December is a very special day for me so I'm looking forward to your poem :) I really like the feel of the poem, I can't ...

I like the legend in italics. Also feels like allying with magical beasts might be humans only real defence against such a world hmm I feel like we’ve skipped some ...

Hi Dove, hope you're doing well :) I thought I'd take a look at this poem to start the day. I already like how you start strong and confident whith ...

Hi raindrops, I’m doing this thing again, where I do read the chapters in order even before those that are in the Green Room. So let’s do this. I do ...

First of all, love that you managed to make lines appear in your story. I approve of the formatting =D Second of all I feel like I read something of ...

Hi Rebel, finally have a bit of headspace for this. Alrighty. I do like the first paragraph. Feels kinda flower-y and sets the mood well. But ofc... ah well. I ...