Tikaya

Alright, the first thing I was wondering is abt this line here: “The arm smelled new”, I did not expect this. Maybe bc I don’t know the fandom and this ...

Okay another Bart story , here we go. I think here’s a “was” missing: “ towards Bart, who raking up dead leaves” Ah bc there is more meat in this, ...

Nvm decided to check this one out after all because I do find Casper’s storyline intriguing. Oh maan last time we saw him train but ofc, it can’t go well. ...

Okay a really short snippet. Hmmm so it seems like Casper was called into battle some time after the birth of his daughter. I like your description of how exhausting ...

New folder, will do this one and the next 0 review one today :3 This is a very short snippet of a story. I like that you show a tender ...

Alright, I think I can still remember the characters from this story so let’s do this. Never mind. I am so lost. I do dimly remember something abt a forest ...

How did I miss this? Arrgh How annoying. That would have really helped with the context for the rest of the stories :/ Green Room, you disappoint me once more! ...

There we go, as promised. Let’s see what the Deltas can achieve in the past =D Also, still wondering how they paid for all that, I think you didn’t answer ...

Annnd we are caught up. I have officially reached the next chapter that continues the story. So onward! Last time, Nine got a reality check bc he thought Six died. ...

I often find myself muttering “Remember remember the fifth of November” so I think there needs no specific reason for why you’d make it quote of the day. I really ...

Back to Nine, at last =D Let’s see if some of the confusing stuff from last chapter gets cleared up here. ….and we’re straight into hallucinogenic tea, excellent! I appreciate ...

Next chapter, let’s go. First one I read that’s not Nine’s Diary! Hm tbh I’m not really feeling this one. I was never much a fan of songfics and this ...

Alright Rebel. The Green Room has failed me, and you, because I missed that these chapters exist without reviews and therefore I’m restarting from this chapter. I’m here for feeling ...

Ohhh what a twist! I never expected KITTENS

I like the beginning of your story a lot. The flow of your sentences is working very well for me and I feel like the descriptions are on point. Small ...