Tikaya

2 more to go. Here we are! Hmm my issues continue: time line unclear, no info on how much and why the MC knows abt his own mission, reeepeetitions. But ...

Well there’s a year between this chapter and the last one I read so let’s see if there are improvements. I do enjoy Legion and James interacting. Good dynamic. Could ...

Hui, long chapter. Alrighty. First question is obviously: Why was Legion even offline in the first place? Excellent, James is also wondering that! Hmmm I feel this line comes too ...

Next chapter~ Oh back in flashback territory, this is going to be good! Maybe now we find out why Ricardo had to die… Ok this sentence is confusing: “Before James ...

So… I dunno how I missed this. But I almost missed this! I wasn’t quite vibing with the first stanza. Might be because “within me” and “thick to see” doesn’t ...

Took a bit of a break but I am back for more ^^ And we are going straight into the nitpicks. What a wonderful afternoon to complain abt small things ...

Green Room sorting is, as always, working exactly as intended. No worries @.@ Alrighty, will do the last chapter in this folder too, so here goes 😊 Last time in ...

Hey there. Finally reached November to properly follow this story. So. Last time, the poor kitten was left outside alone and then picked up by medical men. AH no. He’s ...

Hia! Have another one of my reviews 😊 Ohh boy I did not expect that twist @.@ I rly like how you have these longer lines in the beginning but ...

I like your writing style. It’s very easy to get into and descriptive. I also like how you use this sentence for characterisation: “ For gentle women with pasty arms ...

And next chapter immediately after. At least the formatting is left-aligned this time =D Oh I like this line: “Caden’s face was a study in tight control” I do wonder ...

Huch I realised I read the first chapter but none of the following. Let’s rectify that =D First up… having everything centre-aligned makes this feel more like a … poem ...

Hi Lavvie! I already love the name of your poem! I'm not sure what you mean by "your face is a willow"; it doesn't really seem to fit the ocean ...

Hi hello! Your story has come up in my Green Room sweep so bear with me 😊 Ohh I can so get behind Nathan here, what an obnoxious reaction of ...

And lookit, you get another review from me today 😊 Hmm I like the first verse, can really vibe with the first two lines, they set a nice rhyme. I ...