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Re: Winter Crush
Hi Alex, I wanted to take a look at your poem and so here I am :3 Hm here’s how my process went: from the first 4 lines: school crush? ...
Jan 2 -
Re: Eternal Beauty | Prologue
I am so sorry, but I didn’t realise there’s also a prologue. Why are you so confusing YWS Q_Q Oh Marin and Sugei are siblings. I …somehow never registered that! ...
Jan 1 -
Re: Delirium (The Prelude)
Okay first review of the new year and who could I review other than you ? Happy New Year Ravena :3 Also I so did not expect the style of ...
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Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 2
Decided it is time for more Garnets. Here we go =D I like that callback =D “that was the size of his actual second cousin that was twice removed.“ Hm ...
Dec 31, 2025 -
Re: Chapter 4: The apartment
Ah I remember the previous chapter. Something about Minna and a Ghoul! Shouldn’t it be “li’l ol’ me” with these apostrophes? I like the way Simon speaks and also that ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Prologue
Hey Ravena, it’s been a looong while. But I have finally settled down enough to read the first work in the TFR folder! I already like that you call it ...
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Re: Death of a Showgirl: Taylor Swift, Womanhood, and Labor Production
Time for another essay review 😊 Hmm I don’t think I understand what you mean with . Is this talking about quantity? Like a certain quantity of A is worth ...
Dec 29, 2025 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 11
Oh I am afraid of this summary. Let’s… cautiously proceed. Sera coming out swinging this chap, huh? Sera wished that the ball would just disappear to wherever Kyle’s net-stick and ...
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Re: Loosely Lawful | 10
Gooood morning, Vento!!! I wanted to wait and see if anyone else would want to lift these out of the Green Room first but I can’t wait any longer =D ...
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Re: Syboleth ch. 13: The Meaning of Life
Ah I tried reading Douglas Adams but never really got into it. But I won’t be biased =D That is a super long AN and you didn’t even ask any ...
Dec 28, 2025 -
Re: A Secret Behind A Paradise Two
Ah a short tip: Maybe you should put this in the same folder as chapter 1? Makes it easier to find it :3 Hmm reading this immediately after ch1 kinda ...
Dec 28, 2025 -
Re: The Secret Behind A Paradise.
Good morning Fannie, happy 😊 Will do your first chapter first obv =D Hmmm the way you use the words “Clarissa Girls’ Academy” it kinda feels like Search Engine optimization ...
Dec 28, 2025 -
Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 1- The Meeting
Good Morning fellow Wooper enjoyer 😊 I keep getting the feeling that there should be a comma after “slight” here: “ with a slight muscular build.“ Ah more tips on ...
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Re: Chapter 1: The Bloody White Swan (Conqueror Rising) [3rd edition]
Hi Snoink, I had my eye on this chapter of yours for a while now and something always came up. But I am here now to take a look at ...
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Re: Intuition: Chapter 1.1
Hello Atticus, I saw you do a Green Room review and figured I should check out one of your stories 😊 Happy ! I like the name Jarex ^^ “to ...
Dec 27, 2025
