Tikaya

Hui I’m surprised that this is still in the Green Room. Let me take a look at it then :3 That is a really good sentence: “I've met a woman ...

Good morning Aet. New day new Syboleth =D Ah so the expenses Garrett has are Val! He leaves her stuff! I guess he also got her to San Franscisco too? ...

Idk why but I was sure I read this XD But yay, more FNAF~ (If I missed any other of your FNAF stories, let me know) Solid first paragraph :3 ...

Aww why is this suddenly so wholesome: “Tea is better when it's with you.” Especially because it’s coming from Jasmine (a tea girl? XD Altho the one tea she didn’t ...

Yay more newspaper articles! I like these =D I like the first one already, especially how you tie this back to Keira having had successful trials before the CIA decided ...

Heya, considering I liked the premise of all your stories so far and was only getting really frustrated about you-know-what, let’s see what you have here. My first thought is ...

Hia =D Figured I also check out your story and maybe make it all the way to the newer chapters too ^^ That said... I feel like the first line ...

I take it, you would have wanted me to continue reading xd I feel like the first sentence works well but that the second sentence could use a trim and ...

Ah so this is part of the moment with Jess? Right now I think the secret weird expense might be Valerie… so him remembering how Jess only ever was attracted ...

…Another time jump? Let’s see how you justify going back 2 yrs which is still 1 yr forward from the beginning narrative. I really like that Val had this friend ...

Well, I too am not a poet XD So maybe this works out for the both of us? First of all: I love the rhythm. I love how I can ...

I feel like a broken record, but I do like to visit the other reviewers portfolio to look at their works—even if poetry usually goes straight over my head! :3 ...

Aww don’t poison the well with your summary =D Let the work speak for itself! Although… Uh poetry is not really my strong forte, I saw all the reviews you’re ...

Ah, we are back to familiar ground. It’s a relief to have a relatable character after the last chapter. Hmm looks like Charlie at least considers Garrett a “friend”. And ...

I like that you mention how rain on umbrellas can be a soothing sound :3 Hmm are you aware of how to do Dialogue Formatting properly? If not, I suggest ...