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Re: Not Doublethink, Just Wisdom (By Jasmine)
Hah, I knew the answer :3 I also like that Jasmine challenges the riddle's wording and gives counter-examples and explanations. (I do like how that stanza flows too!) Paradoxes create ...
May 12 -
Re: I'll Be Your Contradiction (By Lavender)
Ok ok you got me to look up something but I still don't get it xd What does "simul falsity" mean? Considering the rest of the stanza, i suppose it's ...
May 11 -
Re: The Marvel of Mankind (By Jasmine)
...Are you sure those first 3 lines are poetry? XD I am the first to admit that I don't get the artform but this feels style-breaking... The second paragraph/proper stanza ...
May 10 -
Re: A Little Bit of Everything (By Lavender)
All of the time... (Yes yes I understand the reference) I even know the answer. Tho I feel like starting with THIS right in your second stanza isn't exactly a ...
May 9 -
Re: You are my Spring (By Jasmine)
Hmmm I don't actually see the connection between riddle and solution. Might be related to how old the two protagonists are? (But then, I rather thought they were in their ...
May 8 -
Re: Why pride not?
Hi Alex! For the first time I got to see the "you haven't reviewed anything today so why not try this" message and so I came here xd I already ...
May 7 -
Re: Our Home (By Lavender)
Thanks for the explanations in the mail (also I like that the poems still function if you don't get all the references. Just nice little easter eggs. Or big easter ...
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Re: Let The Sky Fall (By Jasmine)
Solid choices for taking care of someone in the throws of cramps in the first stanza :3 I like how the second stanza flows, how the words match and rhyme ...
May 5 -
Re: Solitude and Odium (By Lavender)
Well let's see what makes you nervous abt this one, shall we? ...the answer is apparent immediately. XD Just from your comments ^^ I think your poem reflects this pretty ...
May 4 -
Re: A Calming Notion, Perpetual in Motion (By Jasmine)
I chose the next poem =D And well, we can disagree on the concept but I still like the answer ^^ Again a phenomenal second stanza. Really like the concepts ...
May 3 -
Re: What We Carve On Time (By Lavender)
heya rebel. I'm late but I slept most of the day so. I love this concept: "I've mortgage on your heart in an eternal lease." That's a really cool line ...
May 2 -
Re: Stand Proud, You're Strong! (By Jasmine)
At first I was wondering if the first stanza was referring to the last poem. But I guess this is plot happening in the background and Jasmine is just really ...
May 1 -
Re: The Map of the World (By Lavender)
Feeling a tiny bit better today. I really like the title of this poem. It was intriguing to me right from the moment you posted it (as a Tikaa-That-Is-Not-Sick sees ...
Apr 30 -
Re: I Don't Care About The Block Universe (By Jasmine)
Ohh now we get more lore abt our main girls! I am so here for that! Also love how it's Lavender who brought in the space time science despite being ...
Apr 29 -
Re: Trust Is All We Need (By Jasmine)
Hey, from the title, I guess I was right =D Now I do wonder if reading poems with storylines while having a cold is a detriment since.... I didn't notice ...
Apr 28
