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Re: Ilna - Chapter 2
Good evening. Let’s head straight into Ch2 This is kinda a redundant sentence, no? “ all the more since, on a warmer day, they would have been light and dry“ ...
Jun 25 -
Re: 🖤🎀 Janice makes a human friend (part three) (last part) 🎀🖤
Okay I take that back, given how short this is, I think having it at the end of the last part would have worked way, way better ^^° I mean, ...
Jun 24 -
Re: 🖤🎀 Janice makes a human friend (part two) 🎀🖤
Forgot to mention it last chapter but this was an excellent stopping point! Oh myyyy ahhh just imagine poor Endora in the box, first hearing the knife against the wall ...
Jun 24 -
Re: 🖤🎀 Janice makes a human friend (part one) 🎀🖤
Well then! As instructed, I have come for more Janice~ I like the red and black colour scheme for the title :3 Hmmm I feel like it might not be ...
Jun 24 -
Re: kids are funny, aren’t they?
Good morning! Saw chi reading this and now I am here too :3 And I didn’t know this was related to Janice!! “They make up either stories from their imagination ...
Jun 23 -
Re: Ilna - Chapter 1
An excellent morning to you! Let’s see what your first chapter brings, shall we? :3 And if that first paragraph isn’t a hook to suck you right in? (I peeked ...
Jun 22 -
Re: I hate my friend
And one more. I haven’t done much poetry lately =D Ohh I like the contrast of the rather positive attributes mentioned in the first 4 lines that then turns into ...
Jun 21 -
Re: Sam and Lazari converse
Oh you might want to put the scene that is immediately before this somewhere at the start of this piece? I feel like you’re dropping me right in somewhere without ...
Jun 21 -
Re: When it’s all done
Heya~ I’m down for more LJ, so here goes! Ohh I like that you point out he doesn’t have a heart in that way! Tho maybe you could have adapted ...
Jun 21 -
Re: Muerte-Alice and the aliens
And one more review for today ^^ I think I will read the other story tmr tho! Hm I feel like the first paragraph doesn’t really tell us what the ...
Jun 20 -
Re: The money gift
Hia! I recently read the previous snippet so let’s head straight into this one! Hmm I feel like since you had the info that Ruth and he got married in ...
Jun 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 18
Well once I have finished reading this you really do need to finish Loosely Lawful with LMS, huh? XD Whoever said that deserves a raise after that Sera-shaming! “All lawyers ...
Jun 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 17
Alright with what kind of dizzing location change are you gonna follow up the sheer excellence of last chapter? Ah okay, we are at least still on the shopping trip. ...
Jun 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 16
Had to go deal with stuff but now I am back for more! Ah we have arrived at wizard Walmart, right? I am so here for this XD Tho I ...
Jun 20 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 15
Hmmm I guess I keep wondering why Avon was like “let’s go to the mountain again” but now they are doing anything but and Avon never had a moment to ...
Jun 20
