Tikaya

I feel like the paragraph starting with "Demeter was chosen as a delegate for an important convention." could use more variety in sentence length and word flow. Also that you ...

I like how this story shapes up to be about how different people/cultures communicate and that you need to be clear about what you want and what is okay for ...

Hello there :) Coming in out of left field with a review. I like that the MC thinks long and hard about how to go about asking Aaron out with ...

I find it interesting that the girls think of watching TV as a bonding activity. There's already so many stereotypes about the activity so I think this is new and ...

First of all, LOVE the style of your chapter. The pictures and the cool font! Also I love the name of the story. I remember my wife playing Eldenring and ...

Hi there, another review for you :) I like that it's a sign of god that she got Green streaks in her hair. Idk it's just a cool detail to ...

I love how they decide to talk about the plan after they are already executing the plan. That's... so typical child-like =D Oh wow , never mind. Bart is that ...

Hi hello, one more review from me :) I feel like here all your creativity is at play and has all the high notes from your usual style. Again, the ...

Forgot to mention it in the other review but: Nova is a hacker, yes! Keypad is basically her home turf, right??? I get the feeling I'm about to find out ...

Had to continue reading, your characters felt so alive. I like how taciturn Uncle Max is. I'm still missing the context on exactly what type of training they are doing ...

Well of course this is a monstrous ad but I was really in the mood for it and you sold the horror park really well. It did feel like an ...

Okay, hi! Since I'm working my way through the Green Room, I'm starting with this chapter and I must say, I LOVE the way you head into it! I love ...

Hi hello, will do a quick review of the other chapter you've posted. And can I just say that the magical elements are deepening? I can really feel for Zara ...

Ah there the "I" missing in the first sentence ^^° Alright, I skimmed the first chapter to be ready for this so here we go. Last time, we got a ...

I swear, anytime I sit down to read, something happens. pushes well-meaning cat away Oh that is an interesting concept: he had grown interested in the dead, so his body ...