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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wish you where here

    I too lost a grandfather and this is lovely. Silly spelling error with "where" on line 6. I don't understand the need for the spacing between "How amazing," and the ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Into the Setting Sun

    Thanks for your review earlier. Don't have anything newer here to review. I hope you're still writing! I do like this sonnet. It made me think of my own rebellious ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: We are writers. We are dreamers.

    You perfectly express the joy of writing. Its so true; anything can be imagined! I don't understand the stanza length change though. The poem is expressing the same thing, so ...

    May 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer's Child

    That is so sweet, truly. Definitely innocent and I see that is a "few long days" after her birth she died. I imagine them to be long because she was ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: chalice

    A nice poem about dreams and faith. I interpret it as someone who has a dream and they put so much faith into it, with somebody else there and they ...

    Apr 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Violin Bow

    I believe this to be showing the power of a violin bow, because it can create music that expresses so many different emotions. It is interesting how you compare it ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I see a world through broken glass

    Very interesting piece! :) I know its old, but you were kind to me, so I'm repaying that. I love how you don't really know what has hurt the speaker ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: A Second Chance!

    TiernanW here for a review. Well I must say the ending made me feel sorry for her, haha. :) I don't get the sense that she lives a rough life, ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: Words Exchanged

    I love the idea behind the poem, which is quite original. You definitely have the knack for writing! Although it is not explicitly stated, I imagine this to be an ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Voices

    First review - if I miss any customs, please tell me. :P This is a curiously ambiguous piece. I gather that it is about your writing, at least from the ...

    Apr 25, 2015


Everything I’ve ever let go of has claw marks on it.
— David Foster Wallace