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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wish you where here

    I too lost a grandfather and this is lovely. Silly spelling error with "where" on line 6. I don't understand the need for the spacing between "How amazing," and the ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Into the Setting Sun

    Thanks for your review earlier. Don't have anything newer here to review. I hope you're still writing! I do like this sonnet. It made me think of my own rebellious ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: We are writers. We are dreamers.

    You perfectly express the joy of writing. Its so true; anything can be imagined! I don't understand the stanza length change though. The poem is expressing the same thing, so ...

    May 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer's Child

    That is so sweet, truly. Definitely innocent and I see that is a "few long days" after her birth she died. I imagine them to be long because she was ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: chalice

    A nice poem about dreams and faith. I interpret it as someone who has a dream and they put so much faith into it, with somebody else there and they ...

    Apr 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Violin Bow

    I believe this to be showing the power of a violin bow, because it can create music that expresses so many different emotions. It is interesting how you compare it ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I see a world through broken glass

    Very interesting piece! :) I know its old, but you were kind to me, so I'm repaying that. I love how you don't really know what has hurt the speaker ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: A Second Chance!

    TiernanW here for a review. Well I must say the ending made me feel sorry for her, haha. :) I don't get the sense that she lives a rough life, ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: Words Exchanged

    I love the idea behind the poem, which is quite original. You definitely have the knack for writing! Although it is not explicitly stated, I imagine this to be an ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Voices

    First review - if I miss any customs, please tell me. :P This is a curiously ambiguous piece. I gather that it is about your writing, at least from the ...

    Apr 25, 2015


Education is education. We should learn everything and then choose which path to follow. Education is neither Eastern or Western; it is human.
— Malala