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Re: Wish you where here
I too lost a grandfather and this is lovely. Silly spelling error with "where" on line 6. I don't understand the need for the spacing between "How amazing," and the ...
Mar 6, 2016 -
Re: Into the Setting Sun
Thanks for your review earlier. Don't have anything newer here to review. I hope you're still writing! I do like this sonnet. It made me think of my own rebellious ...
Mar 6, 2016 -
Re: We are writers. We are dreamers.
You perfectly express the joy of writing. Its so true; anything can be imagined! I don't understand the stanza length change though. The poem is expressing the same thing, so ...
May 24, 2015 -
Re: Summer's Child
That is so sweet, truly. Definitely innocent and I see that is a "few long days" after her birth she died. I imagine them to be long because she was ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: chalice
A nice poem about dreams and faith. I interpret it as someone who has a dream and they put so much faith into it, with somebody else there and they ...
Apr 27, 2015 -
Re: The Violin Bow
I believe this to be showing the power of a violin bow, because it can create music that expresses so many different emotions. It is interesting how you compare it ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: I see a world through broken glass
Very interesting piece! :) I know its old, but you were kind to me, so I'm repaying that. I love how you don't really know what has hurt the speaker ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: A Second Chance!
TiernanW here for a review. Well I must say the ending made me feel sorry for her, haha. :) I don't get the sense that she lives a rough life, ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Words Exchanged
I love the idea behind the poem, which is quite original. You definitely have the knack for writing! Although it is not explicitly stated, I imagine this to be an ...
Apr 25, 2015 -
Re: Voices
First review - if I miss any customs, please tell me. :P This is a curiously ambiguous piece. I gather that it is about your writing, at least from the ...
Apr 25, 2015
