Thisislegacy

Thank you. I wasn't sure if I showed my emotion well. It was difficult to put the emotions into words that made sense and I'm glad you were able to ...

I wrote this on a phone. It wasn't intentional but thank you for pointing out how the flow doesn't work quite right.

It is very picky about stanza breaks. I usually put dashes for my stanza break so that it recognizes a character there instead of a typical line break. You can ...

Yeah, I've noticed that if you copy/paste from an outside source it will remove the stanza breaks.

You could always change the order of the words to read "...slowly opened" and then find a close rhyme of opened (such as broken). :)

This essay was purely informational, so I was not allowed to put my opinion into it.

I love this review. Sadly I had already turned it in the way you see it now. It has not been graded yet, but I will keep your kind of ...

That was the in text citation.

Thank you. My peer editor in school did not find any issues that needed to be fixed. (I edited hers and she had many grammatical issues that I had to ...

Yeah but it is more fun to bother my teacher.

I was trying to stay neutral because I agree with both sides and the teacher doesn't want me to be neutral lol. But I see your points, I need to ...

Hell is a place, the numbers are references. Hopefully that helps you understand this some more.

The whole second stanza doesn't make much sense to me personally. Also the beginning of the third stanza and the last lines of that stanza as well don't connect in ...

I'm not looking to be published yet but thank you for the tips.

You're welcome.