Thisislegacy

I thought I had my syllables right. I counted by line 5 then 7 then 5. I might have miscounted the Over and snickering. I'll fix it.

Yeah this is a first try for a haiku for me xD.

It is very candid. It might make sense to read the first open letter and comparing. I don't know. It might need more work.

I rewrote this into a letter type format although not exactly. Tell me what you think.

I wrote a part 2 if you want to read it. It is a lot more personal and more real life actions of what happened.

I wrote a part 2 if you want to read it. It's a lot more personal and more real life actions of what happened.

Thank you for the review. I will work on it.

Thanks. The bold makes a "secret" message if you couldn't tell.

I edited the one thing you told me to. If you have any other recommendations or questions about content you can always tell me.

Thank you.

Thank you.

I'm glad to see that you added stanza breaks now. I'll let you do any more revising that you have planned and then review again. Best of luck.

Thank you. I put it in satire because of the fact everyone wants to be payed attention to, and the more people want attention, the louder the noises get (hence ...

Thank you.

Thank you.