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Re: Of Artefacts and Rebellions
I didn't know if it was publishing center or you, so I pointed it out. And I was taught to use camera angles. I would look online at popular scripts ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Blackout Poem number 3
Thank you for the review. I thought I had my tenses all correct. I will fix that. But I can't change any of the other words because it is a ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Traffic Jam
Thank you for the review. I just took these off my random document that had lyric couplets (which is why the meter seems to change, I didn't edit them). I'll ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Blackout Poem number 3
Thanks for the review. I had a hard time because of the nature of the poem style. I'm new at blackouts so I've been practicing. (also I have a hard ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Blackout Poem number 2
Thank you. I wasn't even trying to make this into a suicide poem but I guess that is what happened. I struggle with the thoughts so that could be what ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Traffic Jam
Thanks for the review. I will probably take your advice on some of this. :)
May 28, 2017 -
Re: Blackout Poem number 3
I couldn't think of one so I just put this one :)
May 27, 2017 -
Re: Blackout Poem number 2
I get the main point of what you were trying to say. :)
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Open Letter to Mom pt 2 (formerly Mother's day)
I will. Thank you.
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Open Letter to Mom pt 2 (formerly Mother's day)
Thank you. I honestly just needed to get this off of my chest and that is how I did it.
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Blackout Poem number 2
Thank you for the review.
May 26, 2017 -
Re: Sleepy
Sorry. I copy and pasted so that you would understand where I was talking about. And you had use of some punctuation so I reviewed in the assumption that more ...
May 25, 2017 -
Re: Blackout Poem number 1
It's all one piece. I will fix the small things. I might make another one today. Thanks :)
May 25, 2017 -
Re: Dumb
Thanks for the review. If you have the time, you can read some of my other words. One of them is still towards the bottom of the green room if ...
May 24, 2017 -
Re: Blackout Poem number 1
Black out poetry is when you use a page from a book or an article or something and then cross out words to create a poem. It really helps for ...
May 23, 2017
