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Haha love it! This is the most perfect piece of writing that could ever come from a cat sitting on a keyboard.

Well, I'm a bit confused. I think this is a poem right now. If it needs to be moved, I believe that you can fix that. If it's only a ...

Yeah, thanks for the tip. As it turns out I work the drive-thru at my work. So this is sort of based on that. And this chapter is solely set ...

Okay, so I'm disappointed in myself now. I thought it was a very good essay, but now that I think on it, I don't answer the question. Kyllorac: I see ...

Okay, thanks for that. I had not realized that I used "bit" in those three sentences that close, big no no, for me. lol I changed it and yes I ...

Once again you have created another master piece! *Hits like button.*

Well, this is sort of my memory from this past Monday night. This actually happened to me and it was a dark time. I was rebelling against my parents and ...

Thanks for the comments. I will rework the things you talked about and make it much better.

Okay, thanks for the comments. I just typed it out the way I had wrote it in 7th grade, so I didn't think about the rhythm and rhyme scheme.

Thanks for the input, guys. I'll start working on it later on today.

Okay, it's better. You already know what I think about all of them. So I'll just leave with this, keep up the descriptions and Keep Writing!

Hey, this is a really good poem, but my question is whether or not you meant for the second stanza not to rhyme. Thought that put aside, it is a ...

Aww, I love it! You did it perfectly, I haven't seen one of these poems in a long time, thanks for bringing it back. As always keep writing! P.S. If ...

Hey guys. Thanks for all the critiques, they really help. If you have any suggestions for anything i should add, then please post it. Thanks sooo much!

it's good. But I really don't know what the back ground is. so maybe tell us what gave you the inspiration for this poem. It's just a suggestion. Hope it ...