ThemagicalEbonyFox

This is heartbreaking.

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Hello there again Kai. After talking to Hein in the Character Interviews club, I decided to check this out. I loved the interaction and friendship between Hein and Washi and ...

I don't know. I'm having trouble deciding.

This just gets even more scary every time I read it.

I've also updated the title to make things less confusing.

Thanks for the review MJ. This was just an idea in my head that I needed to get onto paper. I liked this so much I thought I'd post it ...

Oh ok. Sorry for the confusion.

Ok thanks for letting me know.

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Hello there. To celebrate review day I've decided to stop by. I won't talk much about grammar because MissGangamash handled that in her review, but hopefully you'll find my comments ...

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Hi there. I'm not that good with reviews yet, but I thought I'd stop by anyway. Let's get on with it: Bits I liked: "He was fifteen minutes late." I ...

Oh my god this is so creepy! It sounds like something straight out of a horror movie. I hope everything works out.

No problem! Looking forward to hearing more from you. :)

Thanks for the feedback. This is my first time trying to write a sci fi novel, so tips like these are very useful to me. As for the last sentence, ...

Thank you for the feedback. I'll try and take what you said on board in future chapters.

Oh and I hope the feedback is useful.