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Re: The sun is black on my tongue-
This poem feels heavy with emotion, like there's something big happening. It talks about how the sun feels black on the speaker's tongue, which is a really vivid way to ...
Apr 12, 2024 -
Re: Neverland Part One
Wow, this was such a wonderful read. Believe it or not, I have never read about Peter Pan I only have heard of it, so I have zero idea who ...
Apr 6, 2024 -
Re: How to be a Vegetable
This poem is like a funny little story about veggies! It talks about how silly it would be to be a vegetable and gives tips on how to live like ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: evanescent
This poem is like looking at a beautiful picture! It talks about sparkly dew and dreams that feel like soft lace. But then, all of a sudden, it gets kind ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: Dear Ex Lover
This poem speaks to the ups and downs of love and heartbreak. It's like a window into someone's journey of finding strength after being hurt. The way you talk about ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: Simple joys
This poem really struck a chord with me! It's like a breath of fresh air, capturing all those little moments in life that make it so special. The imagery is ...
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: In these woods, we hide
Wow, what a cool little story! I love how it dives straight into the action with Celina and Alejandro in the spooky forest. The idea of them being cursed into ...
Mar 30, 2024 -
Re: chess, rooks, and finger tattoos
Hi I hope you are doing good. This was such a treat to read, I loved the way you progressed the story. You started by talking about how much it ...
Mar 30, 2024