ThekingsAdvisor
- 22 reviews • Page 1 of 2 • 1, 2
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Your story starts off with an intensity that immediately pulls the reader in. The setting, with its perfect day, creates a lovely contrast with the imminent darkness that unfolds. I ...
Sep 29, 2024
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Your poem resonates with such raw emotion and honesty. The way you express your grief and the profound impact of loss is deeply moving. It's clear that you're grappling with ...
Jul 2, 2024
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Hello! I hope you're well. I noticed the tenth chapter of this series in the green room and read a part that piqued my interest. It made me eager to ...
Jul 2, 2024
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Wow, this story is so intriguing! I love how you introduced Kazriel Shyshadow, and the name itself is so cool and mysterious. The description of his appearance really paints a ...
Jun 23, 2024
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Wow, that story was intense! I really got hooked from the beginning with the sense of being hunted and the vivid description of the monster tearing through the narrator’s flesh. ...
Jun 23, 2024
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Wow, that poem really resonated with me! I love how it captures a sense of peace and introspection. The imagery of floating in a sea of color and warmth is ...
Jun 23, 2024
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Wow, that story really touched my heart! I loved how it started with such intense emotion as Kayra stood on the bridge, feeling overwhelmed by guilt and despair. The way ...
Jun 22, 2024
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Wow, that story was really something! I loved how Auriel, the magical bird with glowing feathers, used her song to fight off the dark demons invading Eldoria. It was so ...
Jun 22, 2024
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Short Story » Humor, Mystery / Suspense
Re: The Greatest Mystery of the 21st Century (There is a Murder Involved Too… SHHHHHH….) Part 1
Wow, what a wild ride! This short story had me hooked from the start. It's narrated by this quirky inner voice of a tabby cat, which is already hilarious. The ...
Jun 22, 2024
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Wow, I gotta say, this story was a wild ride from start to finish! Let me break it down for you. First off, that prologue had me hooked right away. ...
May 4, 2024
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Wow this was looong, but i dont regret it. Wow, this is an incredibly intense and emotional story of love, heartbreak, and self-discovery. It's raw and honest, capturing the rollercoaster ...
Apr 28, 2024
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This story is really intense! It starts with the main character having these creepy nightmares about a shadowy figure, and then things get even scarier when the figure starts showing ...
Apr 28, 2024
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This story feels like a peek into a day in the life of Simone and her friends. Simone seems to really enjoy the outdoors and hanging out with her friends, ...
Apr 28, 2024
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This poem is like a glimpse into someone's thoughts as they look up at the stars. It's simple but really powerful. The way the speaker compares the shine of the ...
Apr 12, 2024
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This poem feels heavy with emotion, like there's something big happening. It talks about how the sun feels black on the speaker's tongue, which is a really vivid way to ...
Apr 12, 2024
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