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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Girl on a Leash

    Wow! I really love how this story captures such a deep and twisted emotional connection! It’s intense, but in a way that really draws you in. Like, this part: "And ...

    Oct 12, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The InterMallium Episode 1

    Your story starts off with an intensity that immediately pulls the reader in. The setting, with its perfect day, creates a lovely contrast with the imminent darkness that unfolds. I ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: Letters You Will Never Read

    Your poem resonates with such raw emotion and honesty. The way you express your grief and the profound impact of loss is deeply moving. It's clear that you're grappling with ...

    Jul 2, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: ♦ Plague of the Desert - Part 1 ♦

    Hello! I hope you're well. I noticed the tenth chapter of this series in the green room and read a part that piqued my interest. It made me eager to ...

    Jul 2, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Shadow of the Leviathan: Chapter 1 - "The Hero"

    Wow, this story is so intriguing! I love how you introduced Kazriel Shyshadow, and the name itself is so cool and mysterious. The description of his appearance really paints a ...

    Jun 24, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: A World Made of Glass: Chapter 1: The Thrill of the Hunt

    Wow, that story was intense! I really got hooked from the beginning with the sense of being hunted and the vivid description of the monster tearing through the narrator’s flesh. ...

    Jun 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Long Descent Into A Short Canyon

    Wow, that poem really resonated with me! I love how it captures a sense of peace and introspection. The imagery of floating in a sea of color and warmth is ...

    Jun 24, 2024
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Twisted Fate

    Wow, that story really touched my heart! I loved how it started with such intense emotion as Kayra stood on the bridge, feeling overwhelmed by guilt and despair. The way ...

    Jun 23, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Dawnbringer

    Wow, that story was really something! I loved how Auriel, the magical bird with glowing feathers, used her song to fight off the dark demons invading Eldoria. It was so ...

    Jun 23, 2024
  • Short Story » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Greatest Mystery of the 21st Century (There is a Murder Involved Too… SHHHHHH….) Part 1

    Wow, what a wild ride! This short story had me hooked from the start. It's narrated by this quirky inner voice of a tabby cat, which is already hilarious. The ...

    Jun 23, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Elevator, Endless.

    Wow, I gotta say, this story was a wild ride from start to finish! Let me break it down for you. First off, that prologue had me hooked right away. ...

    May 4, 2024
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Goodbye forever, Never Mine - part I

    Wow this was looong, but i dont regret it. Wow, this is an incredibly intense and emotional story of love, heartbreak, and self-discovery. It's raw and honest, capturing the rollercoaster ...

    Apr 28, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Box Children - Chapter 1

    This story is really intense! It starts with the main character having these creepy nightmares about a shadowy figure, and then things get even scarier when the figure starts showing ...

    Apr 28, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The day we met

    This story feels like a peek into a day in the life of Simone and her friends. Simone seems to really enjoy the outdoors and hanging out with her friends, ...

    Apr 28, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Fate

    This poem is like a glimpse into someone's thoughts as they look up at the stars. It's simple but really powerful. The way the speaker compares the shine of the ...

    Apr 12, 2024


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