The_Soul_Destroyer

Hi there! I really like this poem but the only thing I find wrong with it is that it is too packed together. If you separated it into even just ...

I quite like this poem not for its poetic genius or its grammar qualities but just because it drew me in with the first stanza. its a comical poem and ...

hey to hell with people downing your work!!! What you have to do is take any criticism with a pinch of salt because really it doesn't matter what other people ...

hey edward!!! i think this poem is amazing!!!! i noticed you are new to the site.... and if this is one of your first pieces i am very impressed!!! i ...

i like this poem as it makes the reader feel like they are the person who has suffered the loss and it helps them to empathise with you. there is ...

i liked this poem i liked the choppy rhythm as it keeps me awake and thinkin on my feet the rhyming towards the end was very enjoyable to read and ...

wow i really like this poem it makes a clear statement and the thought process is fantastic!!! i particularly like the contrasts between the innocent children and the sinful adults.... ...

ok for someone who doesnt write poetry you have done a hell of a job my friend!!!!! i mean seriously!!!!! its amazing!!!! you should totally write poetry more often i ...

oh my goodness!!!!!! this is an amazing piece!!!! you could not have made it any more touching. the emotion the reader experiences while reading this is undescribeable!!!!! there is so ...

i love this poem it makes me feel as if i am you when i am reading it as if i feel every emotion that you feel it is hard ...

OK all of the reviews that i just read are pretty dire and frankly i dont agree with them to start with when i read the title: i thought wow ...

this poem is very good although there are some slight mistakes it is nothing to worry about and make sure criticisms from other people do not stop you from writing.. ...

i love the simplicity of this poem and how it shows that the imperfections of something is what makes it unique and amazing! i am very impressed by this i ...