TheWorldIsMyLife

Thank you! I love that you like my story :) I'll post the next chapter when I get some more reviews

Hey, this seems very interesting and I'm thirteen too! :D I think YWS has done the same thing as it did to mine. Did you use spaces to get the ...

Aha well done :D

Thanks :)

Thanks for the review, I know what you mean about the kiss but Nathan is a weird character (I guess in a good way though). I'm trying to get it ...

I'm trying my best with the description but I suck, haha. Happy new year! And I'll tell you when I put up the next chapter, thanks :)

Thanks, I was going to change the title at some point because when I was writing it in Microsoft Word I hadn't given it a title. But to be honest ...

Thanks for that :)

Thanks, that's a giant help. I'll make sure I add this stuff in to the second part before I submit it and I'll edit this to make it more interesting ...

Speechless in a good way? :D

Aw damn it has messed it up :( I'll try and fix it then let you know

I see what you mean. Looking back now, I can tell how general it is.. I shall think of something unique!

Thanks for this :) It will help me develop my writing so yay! I wrote this almost a year ago without any editing on another website which gave me NO ...

That is so amazing! I love how it's so short and concise. And it seems mysterious even though you explained things clearly. As Noelle said, I thought it wouldn't be ...