TheWorldIsMyLife

Yeah I haven't written in like a year but wanted to get back into it (I'm usually into novels etc) so y'know

Thanks for your review :3 It's my first poem so I get that it's not the best haha. Always room for improvement hehe

The element of wonder after finishing the story was what I was intending so I'm glad it's come across in a good way - I'm glad you enjoyed my story ...

Hi :) thanks for reviewing my story. It's interesting to get different views from readers because, obviously, I know what's going on but I need to remember that the only ...

Hi :) Thanks for the review - I have used British spellings throughout but I will check my grammar and stuff. I appreciate you taking the time to review my ...

Thanks, I will have to sort out the earthquake section x

Thanks :)

Thanks for the help, it's hard to add in what you were saying with the 500 word limit but I've added a a vague idea with one little sentence about ...

Thanks, this really helps :)

Yeah it's not really my best chapter but I'll make sure to edit it soon :)

Haha I need to start editing these now. I'll definitely tell you when the next part is up :)

Thanks for the suggestions! I didn't actually know about not having a comma unless I wrote 'he said' or something :)

There aren't any paragraphs and why are there so many question marks? It's kind of hard to read at the moment, maybe you should sort it out a little bit.

There aren't any paragraphs and why are there so many question marks? It's kind of hard to read at the moment, maybe you should sort it out a little bit.

Wow this is a very detailed review, thanks :) I'll make those changes soon.