TheWorldIsMyLife

Hey! This story is really interesting. I'd love you to tell me when you've got the next part up. I love the whole nightclub thing and, even though @Cadi doesn't ...

Okay, I saw this poem was about romance so I was instantly intrigued, haha. Things I love: In the first stanza, I like the fact you've added more to the ...

Okay, I love this poem so so so much! Do you know that you are fantastic?! I love how this is set out with the Roman numerals to introduce each ...

I love how you have created pain and mystery in this poem. "My tears make a river down my cheeks" I love how you've said the tears are a river. ...

Despite the grammatical errors, this is a very good poem. I love the first two lines because of the way they flow, especially when read aloud. However the second line ...

I love the whole idea of the lake and how the person was so calm about her situation. It was almost written like a story, but it still seemed poetic ...

This poem is amazing! I really love it. I love how it flows through every verse and the idea is inspiring. Keep writing because I love this :) ~The World.

This is very very good, despite it only being a draft copy. At times it is rushed a teeny little bit but that's only being picky. Maybe paragraph it, this ...

This is a very good poem :) I loved the short and snappy phrases throughout it and how it links with the title. This also gives me a picture of ...

I liked this a lot. Especially the first verse. I loved the simplicity of it and how it was somehow mysterious, begging us to read the rest. As @bobbywalker said, ...

This is a very good poem but, even though it's probably a mistake, the bullet points aren't needed. "you promised 4ever,4life," should be "you promised *forever*, *for life*,". Also, some ...