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I love the whole idea of the lake and how the person was so calm about her situation. It was almost written like a story, but it still seemed poetic which is very good. I also love how concise it is and how it "gets to the point" on the first couple of lines.

The onomatopoeia in the "dull plop plop plopping" line was very effective, I thought, and you described things well which created a picture in my mind. And I loved the start:
"I sat in my little rowboat
So far into a lake
And, Oh! thought I;
How far was I!
For I could not even see distant shadows." It opened things very well.
Very very good, keep writing
~ The World