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Re: Forever - Part Seven - The Mansion
Thank you so much, Chikara!
Jun 25, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part Six - The View
Thank you, Chikara! Doing a total rewrite is now very important to me. (I'm not being sarcastic)
Jun 25, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part Five - The Cabby
Thank you, Chikara!
Jun 25, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part Four - The Masked Man
Thanks, Chikara! (btw, I've had my vision pixelate before when I almost fainted)
Jun 25, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part Two - The Captive
Thank you, Chikara. Now I see I REALLY need to rewrite this chapter!
Jun 25, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part One - The Farewell
Thank you, Chikara!
Jun 25, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part One - The Farewell
Thank You!
Jun 25, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part Three - The Caped Figure
Thanks, Mordax!
Jun 22, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part Two - The Captive
Thank you, Mordax! Your input is very helpful!
Jun 22, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part One - The Farewell
Hi, thanks for your review, Mordax! Yeah, I wrote this chapter a while back, it is definitely due for revision! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Jun 22, 2021 -
Re: Winter
Thank you, Lee! I will work on this some more. :)
Jun 22, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part Seven - The Mansion
Thank you so much, Harry!
Jun 21, 2021 -
Re: Forever - Part Seven - The Mansion
Thanks! Have you read the previous parts?
Jun 21, 2021 -
Re: Winter
Thank you! That one part is like the changing of seasons, like time helps heal hurt. I think that's what I was getting at.
Jun 21, 2021 -
Re: Winter
Thank you, May! I will definitely work on rhyming the ending more.
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