TheWalkinDude

Noticed that nobody had reviewed your first chapter yet, so I thought I'd go for it. I shoved my hands against the door, watching the long nails scratch my wrist, ...

I would have to agree with StoryWeaver as far as this being a good song. As far as being poetry, it's too simple. Poetry is just like a short story ...

Huh, well, that's kind of neat. I've never heard of found poetry before. It seems a bit like stealing another's work, but you're still changing it. I also like how ...

To be completely honest, I see nothing that needs to be changed or fixed. My only problem is the lack of capitalization and punctuation, but that's just because I'm a ...

Hm, this is very interesting. I've never read a poem that actually seemed to have a bit of a hypnotic trance upon the reader. It's actually a pretty cool concept, ...

Although I'll admit I don't understand this poem, I still really liked it. As far as I can tell, the structure has a nice flow and the rhythm, although it ...

Dude, great job on the revisions on this story. I especially like how you listened to Delmarria and added the part where Pork of Loins struggles over Feo's name. Made ...

Howdy, Ilya! I like the style of this poem above everything so far. It seems to be jumbled up and missing a few parts. Of course, that's what I like. ...

Howdy and welcome to YWS! I'm a big fan of simplistic styled poems that are straight forward and more literal in their meanings, so this poem had me from beginning ...

Howdy, WWWL! First off, good poem. Interesting topic and interesting wording. I'm typically more a literal person and take things quite literally a lot of the time (this has landed ...

I honestly hate being like those people that all they do is post "Oh my gosh! I love your poem! You're so talented and blah blah blah" mostly because I ...

Wow, man, this is indeed a great short story and I can see why you won a competition for it. I'm normally not big on sports stories (especially football) but ...

I know you're angry with me, but please give me some time , (comma here) To sort things out within my head . (period here) This line feels to forced ...

Pagan rituals to compliment the season, to bring about the solstice to give us a reason. Standing tall, majestic, gift to the royalty of the UK. In the rooms they ...

Yo, dudette! I rather like this limerick. It's fun and the reference is easy to pick up (and not just because of your spoiler at the beginning). Although I do ...