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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Mind of an Analyst

    Dear Charizard821, Thankyou for being patient and waiting. Well let me start off with this short little review. At first glance I was hoping it was going to explain why ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Tomato

    Dear Charizard821, To be honest I have your full username Memorized now. I have fallen in love with your poetry and this one just made me fall even harder. The ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Roses and Violets Speak Volumes of You

    Dear Charizard821, I must say that this is also an amazing piece by you and that I honestly saw now errors when reading through it. So let me tell you ...

    May 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Sugar-Coated Melody

    Dear Bambi, This piece was very interesting and heart touching. I was able to see a scene and a movie going on in my mind while reading the poem. I ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Stoneslide - Chapter 11

    Dear Author, I will be honest with you, I skipped the other chapters and was very confused with what I just read. However, that is actually a good thing. Some ...

    May 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: I don't aim at heaven

    Dear Author; I would like to start by saying that I have been inactive for a while now and this is my first review since returning. To be honest I ...

    Apr 24, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: When A Loved One Passes (First Post)

    Dear Friend, I am proud to be able hko review this work,but I am not going to write anything in my review that will help you out in your writing. ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Consumed

    Dear Author, I am not going to tell you that you have made any mistakes, because poetry, is not designed to be perfectly constructed. I must say, however, that this ...

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Arctic Flower- Chapter One

    Dear Author, I must admit, I would buy this book when you finish it. I mean of course there are some spelling and grammar checks, but I am not going ...

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Saiyan and the Avatar

    Dear Author,   I must admit that I absolutely hated reading this piece of literature. It was not because of the story or even the idea, but because of your ...

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Pressure

    Dear Sylar14, I'm going to be completely honest I found this piece of literature to be a bit disappointing. However, I only feel like that, because of the writing style. ...

    Jan 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Sun Will Rise

    Dear Charizard, I must say that this poem, just changed my mood for the day. My car was just repossessed, and I was losing faith in the people of this ...

    Jan 22, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Man Behind A Mirror

    Dear QuentintheSad, I'm going to start by apologizing, I was way to interested in the story. Therefore, I didn't find any errors or mistakes. I did however, love the way ...

    Jan 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Hellbound

    I must say that I have never been able to find a well written piece of poetry, over this particular subject. However, I'm quite impressed with your writing style and ...

    Jan 20, 2015


I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25