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Re: Affinity 7.1 Avery
Hello once again TimmyJake, I have come back to review your work =) I am supposed to be doing school but I don't feel like it. Plus, doesn't reviewing peoples ...
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Re: Affinity 6 Ally
Hey TimmyJake, I am back to start reviewing the next half of your story, not that I am much good. Therefore may not help any =P First off I want ...
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Re: The Confused Little Fellow
Hello JamesClark! The Silent Bagpipe here to review some of your work! First off let me just say - Wow. This was really good for your first piece of work. ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: Prologue: Voice & a Six String
Hello *checks out the username again* Oh, its my sister. HELLO ROSE *POKES* Let me just say - BLISTERING BLUE BARNACLES!! TEN THOUSAND THUNDERING TYPHOONS, THIS IS AWESOME! (You can ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Mosquito
Hello there Sunset101! Selina here to review some of your hilarious/realistic work! First off I just wanted to say that this poem was very well written, you did an amazing ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Assumptions
Hello there Falconer! Celtic Thunder1438 here to review some of your work! First off I just want to say that I LOVED this piece! It is in the top 5 ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: it's not very safe in wonderland
Hello LadySpark! Celtic Thunder1438 here to review some of your amazing work! First off I just want to say that this poem was really good and kept me entertained. You ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Leaving Home
Hello Bball41! Celtic Thunder1438 here to review some of your work! First off - This poem was really well written, and even though I am not 18 or leaving home, ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Anemia
Hello WaltzingDreams! CelticThunder1438 here to review some of your work! Let me just say that this poem was actually kind of cool, coming from a person who has passed out ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Viva Christo Rey!
Hey PickledChrissy! I have come once more to review some of your work. I have been on a reviewing kick and have done a tone of it, next thing you ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 5.4 Ally
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER BEFORE I DON'T HAVE ANY MORE TO CORRECT UNTIL I GET MORE INTERNET!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! *SNIFFLES LOUDLY AND REACHES AROUND FOR A KL
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 5.3 Ally
HELLO THERE TIMOTHYJAKE, GOOD TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK! NOW ONTO THE REVIEW....(I LOVE USING CAPITAL LETTERS. MAKES EVERYTHING OUT OF THE ORDINARY!) YAY THEY FINALLY MET AGAIN!!! *JUMPS ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 5.2 Ally
*GRINS* Hey TimmyJake! Once again my mind told me to read the next chapter and review it cause it wanted more information =P You certainly gave me more information, but ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 5.1 Ally
Hello there once again, TimothyJake! (How many times am I gonna say that eh? It's good though cause it means you have gotten really far in your story, which I ...
May 26, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 4.3 Avery
*finishes my tomato sandwhich as I read, then takes a drink and starts to review* Hey, TimmyJake, hello Timothy, how's it going, TimmyJake?, and all those greetings. Once again I ...
May 26, 2015
