TheShauzer

I'm sure I will, there is a lot of material! :") Ya I totally get what you're saying, and you worked your ideas into the poem really well. Good job!

Thanks a lot for the advice firepower, and although I understand and partly agree with you, I think I'll keep it the way it is... In the faint hope that ...

Thanks Jazzy, means a lot :)

Thanks a lot Storm, means a good deal that my poetry appeals to you :) and by the way, short stories are my strong point ;)

Review day ;) Digging deep for poems, glad I found this one.

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Hi vibe, TS here reviewing :) This piece, in all honesty, bored me. A piece of poetry should do the exact opposite of this, it should drag you in to ...

Good luck with it :)

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Here to help ;)

Haha :") thanks for the review Emma ;)

Thanks a lot Emma :) I know, I don't like the numbering either but without it YWS just tortures the formatting :"(

Thanks Tiff ;) I'll try to keep up the standard :")

Actually, looking back over this, I think you may have reviewed the wrong piece :')

Thanks farah :') Well poetry isn't really my strong point but I'll get better ;)

Good luck!