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Re: Dear Professor Caesar
YOU ACTUALLY CHECKED IT, I AM SO HAPPY!! (AND SO SORRY ;-;) Yeah, so, I was new to prose when I wrote this so I didn't exactly understand the concept ...
Apr 8 -
Re: A Peasant's Plea
Thanks for the... comment, Tika! This is referring to Napoleon's stupid 1812 Russian campaign, yes, where Tsar Alexander I used the scorched earth tactic to screw over Napoleon's plans to ...
Apr 7 -
Re: A terrible poem
This poem is truly GOATed
Apr 6 -
Re: The Ever-Changing Stasis (By Lavender)
Thanks for the review, aquarious! I am glad that you like the rhyming structure, it's a prominent feature of Lavender's poetry -- the persona writing this poem -- and it's ...
Apr 6 -
Re: The Final Kiss (By Jasmine)
Hey there, Tika! Thanks for the review as always! :p About 'in', yeah, that was a brain fart -- thanks for rectifying it! Yeah, so, I am planning to make ...
Apr 6 -
Re: Breath of the Wild (By Lavender)
Hey! So this is more of a series of poems that I have recently started for the National Poetry Writing Month where two locers, Lavender and Jasmine, exchange poems to ...
Apr 5 -
Re: I LOVE LIFE!!! (By Jasmine)
Hey there, LarsJane! Thanks for the review and welcome to YWS! About the line, it was more of a warning that was intended to say something along the lines of ...
Apr 5 -
Re: I LOVE LIFE!!! (By Jasmine)
Thanks for the review, STATSCREAM! The poem is written in free verse and it is a form of poetry that does not rely ot rhymes or lyric struture, but the ...
Apr 5 -
Re: It's You, My Love
Thanks for the review, Tika! (I am calling you that from now on, I hope you don't mind lol) I mean, it's more of a lullaby with a soft opening ...
Apr 4 -
Re: The Final Kiss (By Jasmine)
Thanks for the compliments, melomorri! :p
Apr 3 -
Re: The First Question (By Lavender)
ALSO, JUST READ THE LAST LINE: AWWWWW THX A LOT
Apr 3 -
Re: The First Question (By Lavender)
Thanks for the review, Tikaya! Also... DING DING DING!!! Correct! Check out the follow-up poem by Jasmine in the next one in the series if you wanna know how she ...
Apr 3 -
Re: The First Question (By Lavender)
Hey there, sophie, thanks for your review! As it's a series of examples, the colon is intended as it is. Also, satyric is a different word, it means having wanton ...
Apr 3 -
Re: Julius Caesar
I have no idea why you had this on your list but I do sure appreciate it! It was originally intended to be a song with alternating rap and rock ...
Apr 2 -
Re: How To Kill Your Dragon [Ch. XVIII, Nine] - Part I
Kek, sure Ig XD
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