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  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: I LOVE LIFE!!! (By Jasmine)

    Hey there, LarsJane! Thanks for the review and welcome to YWS! About the line, it was more of a warning that was intended to say something along the lines of ...

    Apr 5
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: I LOVE LIFE!!! (By Jasmine)

    Thanks for the review, STATSCREAM! The poem is written in free verse and it is a form of poetry that does not rely ot rhymes or lyric struture, but the ...

    Apr 5
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: It's You, My Love

    Thanks for the review, Tika! (I am calling you that from now on, I hope you don't mind lol) I mean, it's more of a lullaby with a soft opening ...

    Apr 4
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Final Kiss (By Jasmine)

    Thanks for the compliments, melomorri! :p

    Apr 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The First Question (By Lavender)

    ALSO, JUST READ THE LAST LINE: AWWWWW THX A LOT

    Apr 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The First Question (By Lavender)

    Thanks for the review, Tikaya! Also... DING DING DING!!! Correct! Check out the follow-up poem by Jasmine in the next one in the series if you wanna know how she ...

    Apr 3
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The First Question (By Lavender)

    Hey there, sophie, thanks for your review! As it's a series of examples, the colon is intended as it is. Also, satyric is a different word, it means having wanton ...

    Apr 3
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Literature Re: Julius Caesar

    I have no idea why you had this on your list but I do sure appreciate it! It was originally intended to be a song with alternating rap and rock ...

    Apr 2
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Horror Re: How To Kill Your Dragon [Ch. XVIII, Nine] - Part I

    Kek, sure Ig XD

    Apr 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: How To Kill Your Dragon [Ch. XVIII, Nine] - Part II

    I am also back with the final review-reply! Now, to address the elephant in the room that I have avoided for a while, I don't completely get dialogue formatting so ...

    Apr 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Horror Re: How To Kill Your Dragon [Ch. XVIII, Nine] - Part I

    Hey there, Tikaya! I am back! "We%u2019re starting on a bad foot afterward tho bc you have a repetition of %u201Cout of the room%u201D which is v annoying in the ...

    Apr 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: A Minor Inconvenience [Ch. XVII, Nine]

    Hey there, Tikaya! Continuing on this stretch of the review-replies: I can see from the third sentence of this review that you don't really like the chapter as much as ...

    Apr 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Science Fiction Re: Heaven's Falling Down [Ch. XVI, Nine]

    Hey there, Tikaya! Continuing on this final stretch of reviews that I still had to reply to... First of all, I am glad that you actually liked this chapter, although ...

    Apr 1
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Supernatural Re: Love, Hate and 69 [Ch. IX, Nine] - Part I

    Hey there, Tikaya! I am back to replying to your replies after a LONG time lol Anyway, so, I'm glad that you understood this chapter unlike the previous ones. I ...

    Apr 1
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Face

    Thanks for the lovely comments, Tikaya! I am so sorry I haven't gone around to replying to you yet, my brain seems to have a general writer's block about Nine ...

    Mar 18


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