TheReader22

Hmmm, I like it. It really shows the effect of being afraid of the dark. The icy coldness of the wind, swims through my open window, it dances with my ...

I think thats a very deep and passionate poem! I think there's only one major mistake: I have to act soon or my chance will pass me by. Its time ...

I loved it! I love all of her books (except I haven't read This Lullaby or Along for the Ride yet). I think all of her books have really strong ...

I adore this book! I bought it when I was in the Acores because I just couldn't wait to read it(even thought it was $$$) I cried SO much when ...

Yes this is poetry! :P I think that it created a great imagery, which is something that is done in poetry. I must stay my hand, out of sheer delight. ...

I long to be free. I like this opening To just fly away, to soar over the colorful tree tops of orange and red. I think this line is a ...

For a first attempt, I think this is great :) I love the rhyming, it really works for this poem! My faith rattles and shakes My soul sighs and aches ...

Okay, I like the poem, but some of the lines are a bit off. I put my corrections in red and comments in purple. Let me chase my ghosts , ...

Very good poem! Eternal life is such a good lie, But in the end we all must die. The life that is lived, has no better meaning, Than if we ...

I think this is adorable! I love the rhyming and I love the reply the boy gives!!:) So cute! Umm, I think most of your mistakes have already been covered, ...

I really like this poem. At first I didn't understand why they were running to the Ham:P There's a few mistakes, is there intentionally no capitalization? the love they had ...

Hmmm, I think this was very interesting. It's a style of poem that flows, but all connects at the same time. Good job, but just one question and I might ...

That's so tragic!!! POOR SNAPE! I absolutely adore him after reading the seventh book!!!!!

That's really spooky! :P But good job! There's a few spelling mistakes, but I think Abigail got them all, so just remember "I" before "E" except after "C" and in ...

I love all the Harry Potter books, but I hated the third movie. Maybe it was the new director.. but I don't know! I understand what you guys mean about ...