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Re: The Beast
This is very good :) I just have a few grammatical corrections/suggestions. They're in a bluish colour. My feet pound the grass under my cleat cleats? My heart hammers to ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: I care
I think you should know that you're very talented and I could never write this style!! I actually have no idea how to give you advice on how to change ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: I am the Apple
First off I just want to say that I really enjoyed this poem :) I can relate and I think the best poetry or story is something almost everyone can ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows
IgnisandGlacialis: If your crazy then I'm insane. Harry Potter is what I dream about at night. I wish SO badly that I could be Hermione or Ginny or ANYONE in ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: "I Love You," You Said
Whoa, that is very deep. I'm completely serious when I say It made me think about someone. Tragic :( "I love you," I whispered, I like how each stanza starts ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: See No Evil, Hear No Evil, Feel No Evil
Wow, that poem is really good! My comments are in dark purple :) I'm not an extreme poet or anything I just want to help :) Beware of the darkness, ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Hermione's Adventure
Aww this was so cute! I think it was good and honestly, I never really thought about the gap in the book. The only thing that stuck out to me ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: I'm Trying
I can really relate to this poem. There are so many times when I think my parents only see me as a baby, even my mom still calls me "chicky" ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: The Pain Inside </3
Another tragic poem :( I seem to be reviewing only sad poems! But none the less, this poem is really good! :) The pain inside is killing me. Here it ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: My Perception of Time
I like it! It's a short, but good poem. My perception of time, Has gone away. And no longer can I, Understand a day. Seconds or years, They're all the ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Why?
So tragic! :( Why do I wallow in my sorrow, I really like this line. It's very strong and I like the use of wallow ;) Nice poem!
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Choices
I really like this poem:) Walking down a darkened street, I find the place where two roads meet. To the left is bright and cheery. To the right, dark and ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Words are death
I really like the message/dare of this poem! I've always been limited, by words I cannot say. I've always been afraid for you, to think of me a certain way. ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: Bella's 30th Birthday
I really like this! This is such a weird twist! I really want to know what happened to Jacob!!! And Edward is like a totally different person now! He seems ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: I Thought
I like the poem and I understand what you went through. I thought we were friends Until the world's end I thought what we had was strong, But, obviously, I ...
Aug 3, 2010