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Re: Fate of the Stone Makers [Part 1]
Hey there! Ithaca here to review your amazing work. I've not reviewed in a long time, do pardon my poor reviewing skills. First of all, I'd like to compliment you ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: I'm way to addicted to this game
Hello there! You've done a great job writing this poem... "Flowing letters on my screen Endless words and so it seems" The first two lines are undoubtedly the best, but ...
Jan 7, 2016 -
Re: The Most Misunderstood Numbers In The Whole World
Hola! I'm here to review your awesome article! You raised points that everyone can connect with, yet, the article seemed slightly dragged . It wasn't as interesting as your previous ...
Jan 6, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 1: Withdrawal
Hiya! I'm here to review your awesome work... [hr] Most of the first paragraph id est "Princess Gwendolen sat with her family on the balcony overlooking the stadium. She wore ...
Jan 5, 2016 -
Re: Tiger, Tiger Burning Bright
You've written a splendid poem! Honestly, I loved every word of it, but like every poem it could do with some improvements. I'll you advice to remove the image of ...
Dec 31, 2015 -
Re: Better than the weather
You've written a great poem Slash, but I did find something amiss. The first line "Let me try to write a terrorist what I find he must have read" seems ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 7.1]
Amazing! The way you portray the characters is commendable, especially the father, whom you've antagonized without really antagonizing him. I've not read the rest of "Bad Lights, Good Lights ", ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: King Of the Clouds
I loved your poem! The way you write is just fantabulous... At first glance the poem appears rather whimsical, but it is— in fact —very meaningful. I think certain lines ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Poems are Simple
InfiniteRectangles, this is a wonderful poem. That said, I would have liked it even more if I was four (I made it rhyme!). It's rather short and simple, but then ...
Dec 28, 2015
