TheGirlInTheDress

There was quite a few things that didn't make sense in the story but mostly all of the time, you could understand what you actually meant for it to be. ...

This made me tear up a little, it was simply beautiful and very beautifully written. I liked the emotion you put into this, it was emotional and it was very ...

This was a really beautiful piece. :')

The opening lines made me think this was personal and so I prepared myself, watching out for some sort of revealation towards what the girl was feeling to make me ...

I first saw this as someone really touching something with the topic of jealous but as I read on, I was a little bit disappointed. For me, it lacked depth, ...

As I read this, I clinged onto it a fair bit because we always see these type of people. When it started to draw nearer the end, I wanted to ...

I'm so in love with this love story, it made me cry how beautifully it was written. It seems so realistic as you see these people that still try to ...

I'll question the same as with the first commenter, Katie because it did feel like Carrie Underwood's song, they have the same approach. There was a few grammar mistakes and ...

I thought it was quite confusing for poetry about Long Distance Relationships though I understand it. When it gets to the third line, it can be confused for something humourus ...